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| Alora Starr 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abuseThis story was great, I would love to see more :) |
| WillTheWatcher 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abuseLooks interesting keep it up. :) |
| TheSilentEcho 2006-10-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseI don't think it's icky, it's kind of sweet really. I haven't followed a Warcraft storyline since the second game, so I may have missed something here. I think the format is a little confusing. The switching between perspectives is a cool idea, but it would be easier to read if we had some indication of who was speaking/thinking. Besides that though, it was enjoyable. |