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RaiKim2009
2009-12-05 . chapter 4
it made me cry. thts good. it means its a good story. i luved it.
NotIntoIt3456
2009-09-16 . chapter 4
Even though the end was rather depressing, it was, overall, a wonderful, well-written story. I loved it.
RaND0mnESS
2009-09-01 . chapter 4
WHY DID YOU KILL KATARA?
ZutaraAllTheWay
2009-08-18 . chapter 4
wow that was a good, sad, amazingly, short story. It was awsome! ^_^ Sad at the end part but good any way!
ZUTARINA
2009-06-17 . chapter 4
I HATE U. WHY THE HELL WOULD YOU END THE STORY LIKE THAT AND JUST AS IT WAS GETIN GOID U SHUD BE ASHAMED. WAT YOU RALLI NEED TO DO IS TAKE OFF THE EPILOGUE AND CONTINUE WRITING
someone
2009-03-02 . chapter 4
omg wats the matter with you? are you likr emo or something this is supposed to be a lovey dovey where the story ends with a happy ending but no . YOU just had to go and kill the relationship. . . i wanted to cry YOU FUCKIN HEARTLESS BITCH
FooFooCuddlyPoops
2009-01-22 . chapter 4
OMG!

You killed them! *gasp!*

and this is the 100th review, I should get like a oneshot or something.. Heh heh jks! XP
SasuxSakufan
2008-10-28 . chapter 2
that's some kind of reunion.
darn cliff hangers, make me want to read more
SasuxSakufan
2008-10-28 . chapter 1
gosh, what's gonna happen next?
New Life so New Name
2008-09-17 . chapter 4
;) how beautiful...
HermionePeace
2008-08-02 . chapter 4
That is so sad.
Azumyvampiremonkey
2008-07-20 . chapter 4
wow cute and depresing. nice.
smy1989
2008-03-30 . chapter 4
dude! that was just really bad! u cannot make them DIE like that! i know, maybe its supposed to make it all the more dramatic and u noe with the everlasting love kind of thing, like romeo and juliet. ok , i am crapping now, but that was just plain mean. u should have goven a happier ending, but i guess u r the author...
Scarlet Elixir
2008-02-05 . chapter 4
that is so sad! but I loved it anyway
SilverStella
2007-08-25 . chapter 4
OMG!
I...You...
YOU KILLED THEM!
OMG!

I did NOT see that coming!!

BRILLIANT!
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