That... was... disturbing... but I liked it alot! You have to update!

Oh please! Keep writing! xo Your writing is very beautiful and have captured my attention! I hope I get to see your next update please =D

Aw...it's so sad...but good to. Even a superhuman like Tima couldn't have survived falling from the Ziggurat. Well, good job! In my favs!

So this took me a really long time to review. I got lazy. Forgive me.

As far as the fic goes, it's cute. It reminds me of the workers at the World Trade Center/September the 11th fiasco. Kenichi might have Tima back, but he's going to have some serious problems with his lungs in the next two or three years.

Huraah for Metropolis fics!

This was thoroughly disturbing. Very simple yet it had a strong impact. I really enjoyed it. Good to have you back. :)