Cool Story!!

@~@ Ok... she lost her memories of maybe this is the part that Pride wipes out her memory with. What is a forbidden one technically? A homoculus?

Anyways, continue updating. I'll be reading

it's Scar the **!!run and hide!!*jumps under bed*OW!!Where'd this telephone pole come from?!

AWSOME LOVED IT

el question of doom,ne?*gets shocked*wth?!
Police officer:Give us the gun lady.*more shock-ness*
Me:OWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW!!*faints*nice...job...*faints again*x.x

awsome job cant wait to read more

her friends from back then are Ed,Al,and Winry,ain't they?wouldn't surprise me none.^ ^ this's good please update!!

This is a really great story two things

The fuhers adopted son is called salem
And his wife is called regina,And if you changed there names on porpuse then forget what i just said lol XD Keep going