omg, its so good. its one of the best shampoo mousse stories. write a squeul!

thank u so much i luv it

hi good

This story, as well as it's two prequels, form what could be described as the best Mousse and Shampoo saga ever written; everything about this series from the Jade dragon to Hidden Memories to this story is incredibly good. It was about time too, Ryoga and Ukyo have great fanfics, Ranma and Akane too, but Mousse and Shampoo; they really needed something like what you did here. Congratulations! Keep writing stories like this!

No! Mhy do you torment me? Finish the story!

[Sobbing like a maniac"Oh my god that was so touching! I hope you come up with something to go after this. Marrige, kids, beating the crap out of Naval and Ranma/Akane. It all fits. Great fic! Another for the favorites list! Ranma should burn for the way he treats Shampoo! CYA!"

Aw! _! Your story was SO awesome, and you wrote Shampoo Mousse true to their characters, esp. at the ending. _ That was such a sweet story. (And IMO, it was a very realistic way for a M/S pairing Shampoo discovering her feelings for him, I mean).

I hope you write more Ranma stories (oh, maybe you have.*makes mental note to check j00r profily thing*). Good job, keep it up!

Heh...forgot to review this story. Well, you already know I love it.

I love this fanfic! Shampoo is my favorite Ranma character, followed by Mousse. The encounter between Shampoo and Navel during the duel ended beautifully, it was really well written...as well as Mousse's speech about loving her for the things he can't see as well. I hope to see you've written more fanfics about Shampoo in the near future... _

This story is great, everybody should read it.

I can't tell you how much I loved this fic! There are never enough Mousse/Shampoo fics, and of all of them, this one is the best! Well-written, interesting new characters, and you kept everyone's personalities pretty well. And the end was so good! This has got to be the best fic I have ever read!

This story was good, I only wish the sappy part could have continued.

Yay! Thank you for the e-mail again. Great story _

the fighting didn't degrade the plot or the story i think. it's been a great series so far. i'm loooking forward to reading the next part

M/S!