Wow.. This was a really neat story.. You put quite a lot of thought into it! I always liked the jadisXedmund pairing (the fic suited my need to read about them. ^_^).. They're such cool characters..
although, I never imagined the Deplorable Word being able to be used in any other world besides Charn.. or being used by a mere, non-magical human, at that.. Very good work, though, you really do have great writing talent!

~ Jadis

Awesome story! Very well written! The actris who plays Jadis creeps me out, she does such a good job.

Hey I'm back. I don't have much time to read but a chapter or two but I just have to drop a line about this one. I really loved how you fleshed out Edmund's realizations here about his true role as king. Ed is really growing into the role here. But I have to say my favorite line too is about Edmund revising his opinion on Susan's fighting ability. It really shows the Pevensies have their own strengths in different ways, which makes them really complement each other.

I loved this story! It was a pleasure to see what was going on in Narnia as Peter traveled to fetch the apple. I could read this and still picture events from "Into the West" and figure out where the two stories met up when both Peter and Edmund could see/feel each other from so very far away.

I believe that this was another wonderfully written story. I loved it so much. That is really all I can say about it.

Ah, it was lovely. I'm almost sad it's finished. Almost, because it has a perfect ending. (Thanks for the answer, too--it helped!)

I'm just a little confused ... you say "In Narnia, a 'th' sound is only pronounced at the beginning or the end of a word, never in the middle. Her name would thus be rendered 'Oot-ha' by our pronunciation, not 'Ooth-a' as they said on Galma", but then, in a later paragraph, you have "I waited in the entrance hall and moments later Bithney escorted the Galman to me". Are some dryads not Narnian? Or am I not saying her name correctly?

Still, though, lovely story. (I like Peter's side as well--can't remember if I commented there or not...)

This was EVERY bit as wonderfully fantastic and cute as it's mate! LOVE!
The last line especially- I wish some of my favorite novelists had the ability to end things so well!!

So I figured this is the part when Peter falls in the lake and becomes imprisoned under it. Really good work on that dream and I enjoyed the part where Lucy and Susan turned the scouting expedition into a parade. Poor Ed doesn't have much choice, does he?

Well I was looking forward to that POV of Edmund's about the dogs when I read that part in Into the West, and I have to say it's really funny how Edmund thought the dogs were tailing him.

I finally had some time to spare and read this. Good old Lucy is such a comfort and I think her teasing is just what Ed needs.

So I finished They Also Serve last night and you are brilliant! I just love how you tie the very end of the two stories together with "nothing happened."

I can't write reviews, I suck immensely at them. XD But I'll try and tell you how much I loved this.
Um, first of all, great grammar! :D Secondly, it's like reading C.S Lewis' work all over again; you write so well! Thirdly, everything is thought out so well - the characters, the plots - eveything!
I'm sorry I can't write much more of a review, but I've got to tell you that finding these stories of yours has made my life complete! XD
I'm off to read the next story now; well done!

Here I am sitting with tears in my eyes again after another four hours completely immersed in this wonderful world that's Lewis's creation but which you enriched with your writing. I've never loved these characters more and there are no words that can describe how deeply moved I am. Thank you.

That was teriffic! Brickit has to be the best OC I've ever read about...