 Madhumalati 2007-06-06 . chapter 1My first thought - after falling off the chair, choking, coughing and wiping my eyes - was "hey, is that Ranma 1/2 or what?" because of the hot-water cold-water deal. That said, turning Sanzo into a girl - and having Gojyo goggle and ogle - was a bit of pure evil. And Hakkai turning into a panda, and using the signboards; and Gojyo turning into a pig - although all things considered it would have been an equally rotten pun for Hakkai to have been the one turned into a pig.
There are too many good lines to quote a favourite, but...
"The two of them closed the bathroom door quietly, taking great care not to look at Sazno’s face. Oh, they knew it’d be a sight worth seeing, probably even a sight worth framing and hanging over the fireplace to share with future generations. But both of them were afraid to, since it was practically guaranteed they wouldn’t be able to keep their faces straight. And that pretty much guaranteed that there would be no future generations."
and
"Apparently satisfied with their panicked nods, the woman made her way out, closing the doors on complete silence and four men, three of them naked, one of whom was currently sex-challenged, in her wake."
Pure brilliance! |
 Eyes of Shinigami 2006-10-11 . chapter 1*is literally on the floor laughing as hard as she can without being able to breathe* OMFG this was great! This was one of the funniest stories I think I have read in a LONG time.
I really enjoyed your writing style, and it flowed so well. The plot was original, and it was more than a little humorous. I think you just managed to make my day.
This one is going on my faves. Most defintitely. *nodnod*
-EoS |