I love it!
XD
GinxRan rocks!

"For once he didn’t play games, didn’t mock her, didn’t tease her—just answered. “Because you’d have to make a choice. And you’re not ready for that.”"

Great job! Keep writin'.

-Painted Sunrise

Brilliant! Insightful and no inordinate fluff. :) Nicely done!

(Renata)

Ahh, I can almost feel the disappointment! The last line really packed emotional punch and was a very effective ending. It was short... but still very enjoyable!

Oh, I love it. It's so fitting.

Aww. I love Gin, and this pairing's pretty good (though I'm looking to try GinxKira, too). This is very well-written. Short but sweet. He's in character, and it fits into the canon story very well. Poor Rangiku.

oh sob!! i love it! so well written, no excess fluff (which isnt necessarily a bad thing) but i love it!! keep up the good work!

:( This is so it causes me to make that face

Oh my poor heart, it's aching. *sniff* I love this. So many if only's for them. Sigh. Is it really too late? Ah.

pretty good

I love this pairing! Great job on it. Very in character.

oh yes yes!! this is great. very believable and in character. well done! ^_^