I like it! However, Simone ticks me off. She's so wishy-washy, and I guess I understand why, after the roller coaster Isaac put her through, but honestly, there's only one girl for Peter Petrelli.

Anyway, this was clever.

it was really good. i liked that it was short. its one of those short ones that just capture all the emotion. but like i said i thought it WAS really good. that was until i read the author's note and realisation dawned on me that it was peter and simone and not peter and claire. i really cant see how people like the peter/simone pairing. she still loves isaac. peter was just and inbetweener. that sorta ruined it for me. though i imagine it to be peter/claire and when i do so, it makes it one of my favourites. but just don't write anymore on it. it would ruin the emotion and point of this little story. this story would go to waste.

Signed

The Sayian Knight

please keep going with this! great start. there isn't enough peter/simone fic out there.

OMG. So good. Favorite, definitely.

It's very ... long. I mean that in a way that though your point is that he's falling, it could have used more thanjust falling. It's good, but would be better if there was just a little more depth, less 'falling' and more ... I don't know and maybe that's the problem, there isn't something else to be but falling. Either way, thank you, it was good. (though as a personal thing I don't like Peter/Simone, or Peter/Claire for that matter, I just plain like Peter. YUM!) Thanks though.

Cheers Jen

loved it. I'm a total Peter/Simone fan, so I loved it.

It was really confusing add more to the story please

That was a cute little poem. Peter and Siomone make a cute couple.

This is great. Hope you continue soon.

PLEASE CONTINUE

I liked it. would have liked it better if it was a little longer, but thats just me. Great job though