plz make a sequel 2 it wair u left of! i really loved it and it gave me some ideas (that arent the same as urs) 4 my story! and how did Serena (Usagi) die anyways? scout fight? assassin? robbery? plz tell me! ja ne! ;p (thair shood b the bunny face thing that wants 2 take over the world heer but i dont no how 2 make it! xp)

AND ... the babys oh

Lol. This was interesting...especially the parts with Haruka and Seiya *giggle* but this was flowing and very well written. The characters were slighty OOC but it made it all the more enjoyable. Congratz

sweet story!
Happy New Years!

that was so good never going to hppen but stil good

Hey this is still your best story ever! I had to re-read and enjoy it. Get to work, you need to be writing... ^-~

great story. i love haruka and seiya

that was really cute!great job!


~GoDeSs-Of-LiOnEsSeS~

It´s over, sad thing. I liked the story, though there could be mouch more details about Mamoru´s and Seiya´s fight over Chibi-Usa, and her feelings about this all.
And of course, there could be MUCH more Haruka/Seiya in this...I like the way it always works out at the end.

Great story, a bit short, but still good.

OMG! that is soo just... WOW!! took um long enough!! lol

~ISC

ARGH! YOU DIDN'T TELL US WHAT WAS IN THE LETTER HOW COULD YOU YOU'RE EVIL!1 BUT STILL SO GOD! I NEED MORE! ONEGAI!

Will you do anything with Seiya's senshi form? It would be kinda fun if they played with it.

Mediocre at best. There is no “instant” connection between a child and some person claiming to be her father who she never seen.

Aww loved it so sweet aww I loved to last thing Seiya said :D are you going to make a sequel you should :D its so good

-Moon Bunnie

You ended it really well! Great job, this is probably one of your best stories to date! There aren't a lot of S/H stories, either and I know for a fact, that it stretched your skills. That is a very good thing. Keep up the hard work.. ^-~ ~Daisuki-chan