this is a good and creative story keep up the good work

That was an awesome story!

I really enjoyed reading it and I'm greatly hoping to see more with Neil in it. ^^

My complements to your beta-reader as well,great job!

Farewell,for now.

This was extremely well written and a pleasure to read. I look forward to reading more from you
Cheers!
~silence~

YAY BATTLE! XD

I didn't see THAT coming! Seriously a bee nest? So awesome. XD
Poor Cronus! Oh and Neil,''Bee ya'' SO FUNNY! XD

^^ Like always I hope you update soon!

OMG YOU UPDATED!
The three last chapter are so AWESOME!!

I loved how Neil was made at 'Depression' because his past reminded him of how it would never be the same.

I was thrilled at 'First step',Neil seemed to go better, YAY!

And 'The Team' made my day! ^.^ Classic COTT moments but with a touch of kindness for Neil.

I just CAN'T wait for the next chapter!! Your story rock!


(P.s: Just to let you know that I USUALLY put only some 'DP:DFXDP' into my Favorites but your story is so great I had to make an exception ^^ )

Another two good chapters. I'm glad Neil is doing a lot better. Maybe he needs to be visited by one of his friends at a time. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Lil-Spife

Wow! really good! Neil is my favorite characters in Class of the titans.Poor Neil...
It's awesome I really hope you update soon! Can't wait!

I bid you farewell till next time!

Aw, poor Neil! I hope things get better for him. Maybe he just needs one of his friends to really be there for him. Update soon!
-Lil Spife

I'm speechless, this is a extremely amazing story, please update soon

very, !VERY! good. Are you going to have Neil tell the gang he's been fired, though, or have them find the message on the answering machine?
SW13

*sniff* how sweet! I'm so glad Neil didn't die!
Just a couple of critiques: I thought that you could have had more of the hero's realizing how much Neil mean to them. Also there were a few grammical errors, but you were writing in present tence and that can be hard sometimes, and it seemed a little narritive at times and I was wondering "well who is the voice telling the story?"
But other than that it was a good chapter. I would like to see some one on one time with Neil and the other teens. Like Archie coming to talk to him with out anyone else. Or Herry...
Keep up the good work!
Lil-Spife

Oh thank God! You're so excellent at suspense you had me worried the whole time. Thanks for updating! I can't wait for the next chapter. It's weird for me to think of Neil so pale.. he's usually so vibrant. Excellent choice of chapter title. All in all, great as usual :>

Awesome work on this, you did a wonderful job.
I was in tears when Neil spoke to Jay.
Beautiful work, that's really all I can say.
I am looking forward to the next chapter even more now!
Keep it up hun!
Winter-Rae xoxo

cool!! neil survived! he's not my fave character, but he's the funniest. cool story!

UPDATE NOW!