haha this is really funny continue soon please^^

This was amazing! I was reading the doujin and absolutely had to check out the fanfic. :)

dude, it's been nearly a year. D=

I found you through the KyouyaxKaoru LJ comm and read the Notebook Kiss doujinshi at your site and I must say that I absolutely adore your style. =D It's so pretty. And your writing isn't bad, either.

Anyway, I do hope that you update both the fic and the doujin soon. Pretty please?? *__*

oh wow, i love this. its just so simply cute. oh kyouya, why DID u kiss him? XD ahaha. i understand that ur busy with college, so i will wait paitently for u to update. thank u! keep it up!

aw update soon!

:O
oh gosh, you really know how to write a good story! (i might have reviewd before...
hehe its made me laugh and scream because its so amazing! (now my sister thinks im weird...) ^^ i love it!!

wen is the next update up?? (Its only a question!! please dont kill me!) *dies*

well, keep up the good work! hope thisll keep you going *gives cookie* :D
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oh this is quite interesting

Aw, the little scene between Kyouya and Kaoru was so adorable, dammit Kyouya! Why didn't you just kiss Kaoru on the lips instead? And you did that because you love him, and I am trying to manipulate you to think so too. I ask coughDEMANDcough for more updates! ;)

OMG! OMGOMGOMGOMG~! Niki-sama~ Ur fic is makingmeuncontrolable~Yoshii! I`ll wait for the next chap! *lovelovelove*

so happy you updated. hope to read more soon.
ja ne

what a great end to the first chapter! i love what was written in the notebook and such... clever and cute! now to read on...

Gasp! :O Kyouya.. not composed? And he returned the kiss! :3 But poor Kaoru, having to suffocate while pretending to be asleep. And he felt disappointed.. :P Hopefully the kiss made up for it.

I noticed a couple errors, not too many: Near the beginning, "Slowly, Kaoru moved the closet hand..." Closet should be closest. And I think it should read "Kyouya picked Kaoru's hand away from the tie and let it go to the side with a soft thud." And then near the end, I think it should say: "His body was shaking more than usual. Trying to stay composed, the Shadow King..."

Kyouya returned the kiss! -dances- I really like your descriptions of everything that goes on, especially with the reactions of the characters. :)

Cute!

Aww!! I wish that Kyouya had kissed Kaoru on the lips, but the forehead sufficed! That's just so sweet... hope u update soon!

Hi!
I want be your beta! please...! well... no... I want make the traduction of "The Notebook kiss" in spanish!
I'm very stupid writing english but I'm very good traslate english- spanish. My friend help me, she know english!
Please!
Please!
It's all for today... thanks!
Bye! Mata ne!!