   Meatballheadedprincess14 2006-10-23 . chapter 2lol that was funny :D ! |
| Richforce 2006-10-21 . chapter 2 Great job |
| 07isHere 2006-10-18 . chapter 1 rushy much? It's so rush rush into things. What happened to long descriptions? I mean the story line is good, but its so SUDDEN |
| Richforce 2006-10-12 . chapter 1 nice job. |
| angeleyes452 2006-10-12 . chapter 1 Aww i loved this. I hope your going to write another chapter about how they get on with their new born, i think it would be a good idea. Keep up the good work.
take care
kelly x |
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