interesting story so far,

I look forward too more soon.

BYe

is this all an actbetween shu and th otherguy to get shu back with yuki?

cos if it is it's working fab!

just a musing!

sorry if thats wrong!

anyway great story!

aww... update!

i wanna see a depressed-&-gone-mad jutaru! [grinning madly away...] cool story!

Please don't leave us hanging! Here, you can have all of my inspiration *hands over a big pile of inspiration* use it wisely lol Thanks for writing such a great story x

I really, really like this fic and I want to read more. Please update soon.

Oh, wow where have you been! you haven't updated in forever. I love this story! I want more! lol. please update sometime, please. *puppy eyes*

Awesome story. I've seen the movie and I never liked the ending, but hey anything can happen right. Anyway if you're still continuing with the poll I hope this ends up with Shu and Eiri together. It doesn't feel right when they're with other people. I really think this is a great story and I can't wait to find out what happens next. Especially after what just happened between the two and Eiri telling Shu not to worry about Kitazawa because he's hung up on Shu. I like how they both answered their phones. It sucks when you're about to say something important and something like a phone ringing or a knock on the door have to ruin the moment. Anyway, can't wait to read more.

Sounds good, I just hope it doesn't end like the movie does, because I love Yuki and Shu together. Yay, well onto the next chapter. I really like this.

Please update soon! I'm going to die if I don't know how this story ends! And you don't want to be accused of killing me, right? ;) So please update.

I just love this story

OMFG! YOU CAN NOT STOP IT THERE! HURRY UP AND UPDATE! It's really good By the way...

UPDATE SOON!

A! what was THAT? what an evil cliffie, and you don't even update QUICKLY? *crumples to the floor, and rips out hair with sheer distress* please update soon? like, tomorrow? i'll tell eiri to give you a cookie...x)

gratias!

ChaosGrrl

(EIB pretending to be Ryuichi); You can't give up! Shu-chan needs to be sparkly and it's only there when you're with him!

Yeah! It's true now get your ass back here you loser!

(Waves here red teddy bear wildly in the air)

KEVIN BEAM! (Kevin hits Maru's face) I TOLD YOU TO STOP KISSING YUKI! TAKE THAT PERVERT!

(That sound wrong for some reasons...)

Okay let me read further...

Bury Yuki alive! Yeay! Let's do that!

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NO! THIS CANNOT BE HAPPENING! WHERE'S THE NEXT CHAPTER TO THIS! NO YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO US! NO! OW! !

Maru?

M: Hm..?

Move over...

M: Okay...

(Start banging HER head on the marble table on the veranda too)

It's a bit confusing in some parts... I have head banging too...

(Was about to continue when she craned her head to Maru's direction, with the most evil expression on her face)

I have a bone to pick with you later PUNK

M: Oh dear...

You know what... I'm changing my mind about Maru. If he's going to help him kick Jutaru's ass then I'm going to be his number one fan.

YUKI AND SHUICHI FOREVER!

NO! HE HAS TO GO WITH YUKI... Fine let him kick Yuki's butt for a while but I has to end with them TOGETHER! WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!

Do you really want the dart on your forhead?