( How sad. The similes were very clever. )

I really liked this, although it was pretty short.

You made a right choice with 'pink champagne' representing Mimi, as she matches the colour and the effects she has on Joe...

I also enjoyed the angst. How you switched from Joe's thoughts on her to their date.
Joe was in-character, and added tension to the situation with his thoughts about Mimi and his responsibilities.

Mimi was in-character too, since she cried when she left him and expressed every thought in her mind.

Joe's lines about how she was like pink champagne matched the angst and the title of the story, keeping the fanfic balanced and making the story enjoyable to the reader, since the plot is complicated if you put thought on feelings and situations.

Write more Joe/Mimi fanfics! You're a great writer, and you certainly have to write more angst! _

*sniffs* That was sad... but it was very nicely written *bawls and hugs Jyou*

Ok, that was really cute. And the last line made me laugh out loud... lovely choice of words and use of repetition. I hope to see more from you.

yeah... Joumi rules! MIMATO SUCKS! no offense to any mimato fans but i just think Joumi rules!

That was sad but sweet. I like the comparison between Mimi and pink champagne. I hope you write more stories involving Jyou and Mimi!

ACK! Sequel! Sequel!