This one is impressive. I have yet to read the book Dune but I saw the movie, I have to say this is one of those that is very ingenius in the use of the poetic interludes. I was first turned to Dune when I heard the song, "To Tame A Land" by Iron Maiden. This one follows in a strong tradition; I like it.

Dune is often said to be the sci fi version of fantasy Lord of the Rings. Both are masterworks, written by great writers, and have excellent main minor characters.

Main difference: LOTR: 22 388 fics. Dune: 40. !

Even tiny LOTR characters like Grima or Ioreth (!) have their own fanfics, sometimes their own fanclub! Strangely, none cares to write about Dr Yueh, Piter de Vries or Hwi Noree. Why? Could it be because a Mary Sue would look kinda dumb in Dune universe (imagine the Sue flirting with a Guild agent because she can’t afford a space travel, or lost in the desert with Paul and Jessica… urgh)? Think about it! We need Dune fics! Fellow Dune lovers, do something!

You have to continue! This and the prequel was so good! It's so well written. so much like the book. I've just finished the first one after seeing the Sci-Fi mini series. Please tell me when and if you continue. my email is

You have to continue! This and the prequel was so good! It's so well written. so much like the book. I've just finished the first one after seeing the Sci-Fi mini series. Please tell me when and if you continue. my email is

this was a large improvement from the last one but it still confuses me about the title but it was very good

I liked it, please keep writing.

I like it. Solid writing, good job.

loved it, laine! u really made it a lot clearer for me. stupid me didn't get it da first time around. *smacks forehead* oh well, m really flattered u went on 2 make a sequel and dedicate it 2 me. write more dune fics, k? i love dem. _