Great revision of the final battle between brother and sister :) I so can't wait to see how you'll handle the end of the series now that they have won :)

Can't wait to catch up with the end and the epilogue! And please, do keep up the great work!

Love
Mireille X

This story was amazing, and I'm sad to see it end.
The epiloge was a little hurried along, but I get that you were more or less setting up for the sequel (which I am going to check out now).
Again, loved the story.

Admittedly, it felt a bit rushed, but still Great!! ;D

Damn Spleef, I can't beleive you killed them both off. Well, I mean I know that Katara isn't gone yet, but it feels like she is.


~Jayy

Nice epilogue, can't wait to see the rest.

Update soon :D

After I read the review Twilight-Angel-XI gave, I want you, Spleef, to know what I think of your writing.

I just love your writing. You have a wonderful way of capturing emotions and creating such wonderful stories. I've read all of your Avatar fanfics and I love them.

I only ask that you NEVER, EVER stop writing. I don't care if it's Zutara, other fanfiction, or your original work. Never consider not writing. :D You have such talent.

With Slow Heat now coming to an end, I'm really curious to see how "Kiss of Fire" will turn out.

I hope you update again soon and after Slow Heat is done, you can focus on the "Kiss of Fire" goodness! XD I'll be waiting patiently for your wonderful updates! :D

Just an epilogue? Crap...I'm sorry, but you should've done an ALTERNATE ending...I don't care how good the sequel is, OI only read like the first two chapters of it and stopped as you turned Zuko into a pedophile...Huge age gaps, no matter the circumstances annoy the heck outta me! I won't even go past a three year age gap! So, this story was very disapointing to me...I will NEVER read the sequel because Zuko's a pedophile in it...I find that wrong and disgusting...sorry...and to me it WASN"T Zutara as it was just her underaged reincarnation...not the same character...I'm sorry, but you've greatly disapointed me in this particular fanfic.

Wonderful epilogue! I really like the detail you put into everyone's little section. It shows that thought, care and attention went into this fanfic. Keep up the good work and update soon!

~Mirage992

I was so sure Mai was gonna proclaim her love for Zuko! I love Slow Heat so much it hurts!

Btw..."I wondered why Azula had chosen to kept the Kyoshians.."

Correct me if I'm wrong but shouldn't "kept" be keep"...

MOAR SLOW HEAT!

Very nice...I knew this was going to be the lead-in for Kiss of Fire. I have already told you how wonderful your writing is and I eagerly await the conclusion for KoF.
This shold appease some...as for me, PLEASE UPDATE KISS OF FIRE! LMAO

Oh Zuko...

The pain and the hurt and all the twisted up emotions-you captured them beautifully!

Wow...I am depressred right now. That ending had me near tears (and that's hard to do).
Hopefully the epilogue and alt ending aren't as depressing. lol
Can't wait for more!

I...I can't... believe you... actually... killed her...

I...
I...honestly can't... believe it...

And..it's finished..it's really finished...

This chapter has me in tears. I love the way you brought Katara and Zuko together and just when things were going right...