I always enjoy getting a look at Kim and Ron in the days before they started on the world saving game and this was a particularly entertaining example of it's kind.

Very nicely done!

Okay, here’s the sitch. Am finally getting back to reading after having to dedicate almost all my time to finishing my all too long story. As I work my way up chronologically from where I stopped three years ago, I find your first listed work, ‘Soulmates of Fury’, the descript saying it’s the 2nd in the Trinity Sitch. So I go to look for ‘the beginning’ on your home page . . . and I find this!

Oh—the title verses the situation is just too good, one of those ‘God how I wish I had thought of that!’ type things. Then you smokescreen your way through a subject without letting on just where you’re going while at the same time touching on all the necessary points. When you finally get to what some people might think is going on . . . you immediately shoot it down and leave your readers (or at least me) completely bamboozled as to what you’re talking about . . . until the very last—and it could have very well have been the very last act that Ron could have ever done—unless this was the true start of his Mad-Running-Skills.

All in all, an excellent work of word-smithing, misdirection and little real life things that make such great stories when someone takes the time to put them down. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

The Wise Duck

Ron, one word of advice: RUN!

Funny!

Very funny, I can relate to Ron I did that to a friend of mine the day she started lol!

Very nicely done. Both Kim and Ron are in character and keeping the subject matter hidden until the very end was most def a good touch.
Yeah Ron's going to be in a lot of trouble for that one.

LOL. Oh, man, that was funny. :D Ron would so do that.

Hehe. That's hillarious! I have to add this to my favs.

funny!

Very funny story.

Dear Commnader Argus

Nice little fanfic; except for that stunt Ron pulled on Kim; sure he is growing up and he not perfect (nobody is); but he should have self control; are you going to continue or is this ended.

I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless


Data Seeker

Of course, this was the first and only time Ron snapped a bra. Also why Barkin was on his case. That wasn't a funny look Ron gave Mr. B, it was a barely conscious look.:-P Good story.

OMG, I can't believe Ron snapped Kims bra like that. That was so roflolf. Peace and Good Night.

Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha. Snap indeed. Funny story.

Very cute...the title definitely fits. It's a little different in that I always thought that young girls were itching to get their first bras as soon as they could to show they were mature. Of course, I'm not female so I can hardly say I'm an expert.

However there is one detail I think you should correct. You made Kim's mother the Head of Neurology. She's a brain surgeon which actually makes her a neurosurgeon, therefore she should be the head of Neurosurgury, not Neurology which is a separate discipline from Neurosurgery. One discipline subspecializes out of Internal medicine. The other discipline subspecializes out of General surgery. I just thought you might want to keep the details accurate. Otherwise it's a very nice and funny vignette. Many kudos.

That will seriously be the one and only time Ron gets away with THAT little move. Not that he's getting away with that one there. lol