I liked this very much.

Great story for a first-time writing, Claye! Really enjoyed it. :)

Lauren

Great first story, Claye. I like how you hinted at older episodes here, which makes those scenes funnier. I even like one part in it that reminds me of another favorite of mine: "The Wild Wild West."

The characters are great too from start to finish. Keep up the great work. :)

Hey! Glad to see you have joined the ranks of the fan fic writers! You are good at it; I hope that you will continue! There is not enough GAH fan fiction out there. We need you!

J... Edgar... HOOVER!

hi ,this was so much fun to read.i love bill and the gang in any kind of you plan to write more.

louise