I know it's angst. But I'm making a :D face. HAHN.

Well...this was...interesting.

Wow I have never seen (well I have) a story fail this hard in just one chapter.

I can see why you didn't post this under your Escapades. It is definitely a quality story but it is completely different from the moods of the Escapades. This was actually among the first of your stories I read after the Escapades (which was my introduction into your stories) but until now I just couldn't review it. It was a well written, quality story but I just didn't know how I felt about it due to the ending. It was a hilarious end don't get me wrong, but I just feel so bad for Sokka that it affects my feelings on the rest of the fic. Kind of like the end of the Sixth Sense, you feel you should have seen the twist coming well ahead of time but you never do. To get off the subject of the ending as usual your writing was superb; though I do I feel your writing has improved since you wrote Ghost. Considering that Ghost was written nearly a year ago though doesn't make the improvement that surprising though. Your a talented author and seeing where you came from (and how you improved) is always a pleasure. And don't get me wrong, though the ending changed my feelings about the story that isn't necessarily a negative thing. Just different.

In summery Ghost was a classic bit of writing from you, not the longest or best written I've seen of yours but thoroughly enjoyable nonetheless and with a twist at the end that makes you just wanna glomp onto Sokka and hug the pain away.

...god I sound like a Sokka fangirl. Which would be fine except he isn't my favorite character and I'm male. Ugh!

As always I really enjoyed this story, it's going among my favorites. Keep up the great work and I look forward to more from you!

You should really make a continuation to this. The title and the fact it was on the winter solstice when spirits have more power in the real world... makes it seem like Hahn, who is dead in the series, came back on the solstice and seduced Toph... like a payback to Sokka for Sokka having earned Yue's affections...

It's be great but I can understand if ya don't. I miss reading Tokka stories though...

Wow.. very well written. You write good stuff. This fic though.. damn. That's all I can ever say when I read it. I really feel for Sokka. Very harsh, I couldn't believe it when I read it. Still it's a very good story

I snorted, and then I laughed so hard I drew strange looks from those around me. Hahn? Sokka has to raise Hahn's son? I'm am impressed with the sheer irony of the situation.

*Wow*. I was reading, and then I got to the end, and I had to go back and read the end again because. Wow.

That ending was sick and not in a good way. I mean of all people. And isn't he dead.

Poor Sokka. LoL I loved it!

Oh My God... WTF! WTF! my god... i still loved it tho. I always KNEW those two would get together! YAY! :D

Know, I am going through EVERYONE of your stories and I'm going to read it... your such a good writer, i think that's why i'm going to do it like that... :D (again).

Jillian

oh man if I was Sokka I would be so pissed! ugh! Hahn, Toph? I think I have to go throw up now.

...I still dont get it xD Is Hahn a real character, or what? Sorry, I'm slow XD Please Forgive, but I think it's pretty good! (The parts I understand that is) Very good actually if you thought it up in the shower!

Ugh no! thats it! Are you kidding me your just going to leave us all hanging with nothing left?

Everything about it was amazing but only one flaw- you ended it. Pleaassee continue *sigh* you probably wont but it was worth a shot anyway.

AHAHAHAA! HAHN! WHE!