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GreenRose58
2009-10-24 . chapter 5
You, are an amazing writer. I didn't leave a review on Kimi No Koe (though I should have) but you did an amazing job on that piece and this one. You captured the characters well and most certainly made me cry on this last chapter! I was a little surprised you added a chapter 5 when #4 left off with warm fuzzy feelings. But I must say, not every story ends happily, but it's good to know that Kyoya will move on with life. Anway, fabulous work! I laugh, I cried, and I even squealed in delight. I can't wait to read more of your works. Thanks for posting~
Roza Baby
2009-09-24 . chapter 5
WHY?! why did you have to end the story like this? it was soo good but you had to kill her off! i was bawling through all of the last chapter.
soren011
2009-08-25 . chapter 5
good story, im sad haruhi died, but you rarely find a story like this, most would have ended at the last chapter...
-Arashi-Yuuna Fukushima-
2009-08-02 . chapter 5
Damn.. I tried not to cry but I ended up crying anyway..
Excellent and beautiful story, I've already read Kimi no Koe just a few hours ago. Your stories are really well-written.

Well, keep up the good work!
CK
2009-07-19 . chapter 5
That...wasn't fair. It was so happy and...happy. And then she died. I'm choking up right now, trying not to cry. That was an amazing story, I loved it..Thank you for sharing it. Beautifully written, majorly sad ending though.
music4ruth
2009-06-23 . chapter 5
you killed her in a car accident?? :o wow I really didn't expect Haruhi to die. but it was a good ending. Oh, and I probably forgot to tell you that the reason I joined fanfiction was to review Kimi No Koe and Invisible :)
music4ruth
2009-06-23 . chapter 3
"'So how can Kaoru and I pull that off, Kyouya-senpai?' Hikaru asked..."

HAHAHAHAHA that part was funny! As always, I love your writing! I actually came across it, through your editing of Invisible, with Wraith-san. ^^ Every story I read of yours is amusing and keeps me full of emotions. Even through your busy schedule and late night homework you submit, which is pretty cool.
music4ruth
2009-06-23 . chapter 1
HAHAHA.. When I read Nekozawa Renge, I reread that sentence over, and over, and over!! XD To think that they would be a couple... but anything is possible! I mean, look at how many different pairings are written in Ouran High School Host Club fanfics? KyouHaru, TamaHaru, MoriHaru, HuniHaru, HikaHaru, etc.
Leechlover36
2009-05-22 . chapter 5
i am such a pathetic little cry baby but i couldn't resist! the end was just so sad! ='[
bleudonne
2009-04-22 . chapter 5
This is so touching. I cried buckets reading it. Boho! No! Don't die, Haruhi! ;_;

Honestly, I didn't expect her to die, after all the sweet and peaceful happenings in the past few chapters.

A rather sad ending to the whole thing, but written so well that it's hard to find any faults with it. Other than the part where Haruhi died. /cry

This is probably the longest review I've ever written (my usual being 'keep up the good work' and 'love the story' XD), but it honestly gave me a warm, fuzzy feeling to think that someday, one day... Kyouya and Haruhi would eventually be together again. I can see it. You made me see it. And that, I believe, is the highest compliment I've ever paid anyone.
bleudonne
2009-04-22 . chapter 1
Nekozawa Renge? *blink, snort, rofl* Sorry, now THAT would be quite a story to read... Lovely wedding, btw. ^ ^
Pineapple8193
2009-04-14 . chapter 5
I really do love this series, although this chapter made me cry! Especially as I was listening to a really sad song!
You've done a great job!
Kelii-chan
2009-03-09 . chapter 5
Oh wow so good and touching I began crying straight away I thought both stories were great you did a fab job :D
angelfiredra
2009-03-05 . chapter 5
you cried while writing it? well i cried reading it. i mean why kill haruhi off like that? ok dont answer that but still...
both stories were an awesome read
VampireInuFreak
2009-02-09 . chapter 5
You are definitely not alone in your tears, o awesome authoress. I cried.
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