Wow, I think that this is perhaps one of the best I have read yet!! The sybolism is amazing. Very well written. I read the terms in INK before I read this, so I definately recommend readers to check out the forum first before reading this.

It makes sense to me.

Beautiful...tragic..*tear rolls down cheek*

Loved it very much. ^-^
P.S. Sorry if I was all..negative. You know, the rolling-tear-cheek thing, I'm just not that happy today(school). I really DO love this one, really.

I like it. Beautiful yet very sad. It's actually something I fear is going to happen to Kurapica at the end.

Wow. I'm not surprised you got negative reviews. Not everyone is as used to abstract literature as you or I. I still had to keep Wiki handy. Anyone serious about giving a good read justice would do the same (or check your journal).
I'm glad you left the end vague. I'm pretty sure Kura died, but still... Its about letting go and being at peace. Very allegorical, and very abstract. Its not a bad thing; just not popular. You certainly have proven yourself to be a deep thinker. I enjoyed it.
~Una

Very good descriptive language; however, too little was explained. Kama, Dharma, Kundalini--? And after 'Even if he could not be sure if there weren't entirely his...' it's a memory, isn't it? Kind of hard to tell. And that sentence (Even if he could not...ect.) is kind of difficult--do you mean some of it is a figment of his imagination?

The woman seems to be more of a caring grandmother than a lover--I like it that way, but I'm not sure if it's what you're going for.

Great story and keep writing!

WHAT?! O.o
that's it?! who is she?! i wanna know...
Kupi-chan is returning for her?! (me stating to cry)
but really
it's a nice fic
keep on
^_^V