Reviews for The Price of Altruism

Reviews For: The Price of Altruism

Radical Pretense Gothica 2007-12-29 ch 1,	abuseThat was so well-written and angsty and whatnot.
Rainbow Stevie 2006-12-04 ch 1,	abuseThis is the best follow-up story I've read for this ep. Lovely title and beautiful exploration of his thoughts & emotions; it really helps me to see the story through Greg's eyes, and understand his guilt. I love the paragraph about them all coming to see him, plus what they didn't tell him. And the iamges of the final paragraph, culminating in how he had taken a human life just by pressing down on a pedal... shivers Oh, that's good.
Ivy3 2006-10-19 ch 1,	abuseAngsty and good.
dArkliTe-sPirit 2006-10-18 ch 1,	abuse...wow...just, wow...I can imagine this running through Greg's mind at the hospital, or even as he leaves the hospital. The poor guy...
Sazmuffin 2006-10-14 ch 1,	abuseFannysmakin', in my eyes, had been one of the best episodes of CSI so far. And I think you portrayed Greg's emotions extremely well in this piece. I've been itching to write one like this, but I didn't want to jinx it. xP Anyway, extraordinary job.
Rhoswen19 2006-10-13 ch 1,	abuseGood narration but more than spoiler for the episode its basicly the episode from his pov. in your words.
Shorty-Ace 2006-10-13 ch 1,	abusei like...adding 2 favs...really goes into depths of being a hero...5 strs! Ashley Sanderson
Gabrielle Lawson 2006-10-13 ch 1,	abuseNicely done. I'm feeling the urge to write something about this too. Got some phrases, gotta find the whole story they go in. Good job with yours.
bookwrangler 2006-10-13 ch 1,	abuseVery good. Very, very good. The weight of the world. Thank you.
NS & SS 4 EVUR 2006-10-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseNice book. I LOVED that episode of CSI last night. It broke my heart. Your book is classic. I like it. Keep writing!
katydid13 2006-10-13 ch 1,	abuseVery powerful!

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