wow that was very hot! gosh that makes me happy yay for hikaru x haruhi pairings!

What? It wasn't tuna? XD;; Looks at your end AN. Haha...nice! It's cute how Haruhi was so determined to eat that ootoro since she has a really soft spot for it XD Hikaru too the advantage so cute how he quickly blushed hehe XD

KAWAII! -glomps Hikaru- This was a brilliant idea for a one shot!

wow that had me fooled until he said : that wasn't the tuna and i was like WOAH! But good story! It was well played out and kept in character! Good job!

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aw, that was so cute! i love haruhi and hikaru, it's a shame there's not more of them out there. mmhm, i say, you should write another part! yes, i think that's a good idea! haha, anyway, wonderful writing!

-hasu

lol. Very cute, and yet at the same time very sensual in a strange...tuna-ish way. Loved it, and I especially liked how you kept Hikaru's mischievous nature in tact without leaving out hints of his shyness when it comes to Haruhi. Good work