Wow, that was great! Different story, but very cute. I loved the ending.

Woah, that was unexpected.

you never cease to amaze me with your stories! I love the way you write and I love the way you put chemistry between your characters.

Keep it up! and I hope to read more of your wonderful stories! (^_-)

Great, great, great.

Wow..again.

Anyway, I was wondering if you had a idea how you think Anakin looks like a woman? Just curious.

Love your stories! :)

Great chapter!!

Being out of wack with life right now, I am review and reading backwards a little. This scene is so true to life. Really enjoyed when you had Anakin goad Obi Wan into treating him like he did before he was she. The others will relax around him/her more too. Really great insight.

You mention Siri so well. She was special to Obi Wan and you are doing fantastic with her character and his thoughts of her.

I really enjoyed this story. Now I would like to know what would happen if Anakin got pregnant, lol...

"Obi-Wan was taken by surprise the day he realized his feelings of friendship for Anakin had evolved in something different."

Ah...we get to the good part of the story now. Should be very interesting to see how this develops. I've been refraining from reading the updates over on LJ since I've started reviewing here and would prefer to keep all the reviews for a story in one spot. However if ff dot net doesn't get its act together soon, I may have to break down and read chapter 5 over on LJ anyway.

And, the scene I was waiting for! LOL...someone forgot to tell Anakin about a few revised aspects of his physiology. Shame on those Temple healers. Although the thought of Obi-Wan blushing to the roots of his hair realizing what the problem was is absolutely priceless!

OH Excellente...The Fight, was great. I was laughing all the way through it. The way you presented it, Obi-Wan saying he had the high ground, and Anakin mumbling about underestimating his powers. I had to put my hand over my mouth, so not to wake anyone, I was laughing so hard.

And the comment about the lack of testosterone, that made sense.

Oh no, Anakin finally had her period. Yep, that first time is kind of scarey... Did a great job w/it.

Oh..and, AND...hurry up and update. Obi-Wan realizes his feelings have evolved more...AH H H H, don't leave me hanging. Must have more, PLE E E E E EASE! :)

Nice story Im looking forward to reading more

What a powerful chapter. Just one snide remark - just wait until she gets her period.

It really worked well with Anakin confessing how he was gay and he & Padme were really friends. I liked how Obi Wan answered and wanted to have a more open relationship. Great job.

Anakin gay? Qui Gon bisexual? What a twist. The story is going into heretofore unknown territory. You have a great writing style and keep the reader hooked into each scene.

Ah! So really, this little event has revealed Anakin's "true" nature. Very sneaky, Ilaria!

I do like that Anakin seems to be handing this transformation well, although I suspect there are yet incidents which will be a challenge for her.

Anakin's explanation for never revealing his sexual orientation stuck me as sounding very realistic. That fear of rejection, especially when it's been experienced, would be a very strong one and I can see Anakin taking that course of action.

What I find more intriguing is how oblivious Obi-Wan is to every aspect, apparently, of his former Padawan. You'd think a master would know his apprentice better. It will make for some very interesting moments when the FULL truth of why Anakin didn't reveal his sexual orientation to Obi-Wan is revealed to Obi-Wan!

Wow, another fascinating chapter. It was very enjoyable, hm m m, so Anakin is gay. And Qui-Gon was bi, interesting. I'm wondering if Obi-Wan has a preference?

You do one of the most awesome Obi-Wan's.

I'm really enjoying this story...

A+ reading.