haha! I can completely visualize Dee skipping into the bedroom!haha! o cute! loved it!

LOL! I liked it! Now the only thing left to do is go into "detail". If you catch MY drift. XD *squeels thinking about it and jumps up and down like a crazy overly obsessed fangirl*

I started to review this, then I realized that my reiview had a longer word count than your story. I will suffice to say this
As a writer I'm begging you, respect the craft. Writers are wordsmiths, and this story was like a tinfoil sword. Take pride in the craft and creation of writing. Make your writing like a fine sword, beautiful, elegant, strong, and with a point.

Minkeys lol

that was amusing...

LOL! i'm not usually into dee going fluff mode but you wrote this so well. it made me smile. this imediately reminded me of the OAV and the ghost scene there. i liked the "Yay" and dee squealing in the end. that is so dee to do that. even if he wouldnt admit it to keep up with his super seme macho image. hehehe!

Thought I'd review since ironically I just posted my first ever FAKE one-shot today too. Not specifically because it's Friday 13th, but... Well, it's just a coincidence.

Anyway, I thought this was sweet. Trust Dee to believe in something as stupid as "minkeys(no offense to your friend). Ryo is the skeptic, after all...
Nice work. You got Dee's dorky side perfectly in character...

TTYS!

RobinRocks x

I have to honestly say that I am speechless..."not on a bad way"