Pleas can you continue with this story I love it and I would like to know how it will continue.

Great story! Can't wait till you update. :)

hey can you update please and did leo and piper really kill chris in this story

Heya! good story :)

When you write in English and people are speaking you use "_" eg

"Have a nice day"said WishIWasAWitch

Its not a massive deal that they are missing, but for poeple who only read in English (like me) it makes it very hard to read.

Such a sad thing to let go for just a one-shot thing. It could be more. Mistakes aside, you did quite well. The idea was original. It has a bitter-sweet feeling to it. It could be so much more. I like it a lot.
Poor Chris, rewarded, but only measured to half of what he should received and deserved.

Good...I like the plot ^_^

i simply love your story! it's wonderful! is there a chance that you write more? *please* and don't worry about mistakes, maybe i'm not english, but if there were any really serious mistakes, i'd have seen them, and there were non (or rather your story was so interesting that any minor mistake simply was overseen by me;-)

I am extremely intrigued

hola, amiga!

Long time no speak! How are you? I found this on someone's favorites and thought, 'I MUST read it!' How come you didn't tell me you were posting a Charmed fic?

One thing I noticed: When you said "Whitelighter's witch," I think you might have meant "witch's Whitelighter." But I'm not positive, though.

Oh that's so sad that Chris was never conceived! That's just horrible; poor Chris!

I loved this chappie so much; please continue with this!!

Adios, amiga
Besitos
~Shan~

Holaa !
estuve a punto de ponerte el review en inglés jaja..
Me gustó mucho tu fic.. pero la verdad es que no iguala a MADE IN USA.. :(
Piensas actualizarlo alguna vez? De verdad es el mejor fanfic que he leido y llevo 2 años leyendo fics diariamente, es mui triste que hayas dejado de actualizar!!
Porfavor sigueloo ! hai mucha gente que le encanta también, xke ya no sigues? ojalá contestes..te he escrito e mails y no me ahs respondido tampoco :(

REVIVE MADE IN USA :'(

Wow, this is amazingly good, especially considering that English isn't your first language. I'm impressed, though there are mistakes and it might be good to find a beta.
I'm loving this story. Chris seems so happy. I was confused for a sec about how he died, but know I understand and it's really sad, they don't remember him. Sorry I'm rambling. Just know that I love the story and I hope you update soon!

Great story, did Piper lose baby Chris in labour so big Chris died but the Elders turned him into a whitelighter because he would cease to exist and they wanted to thank him for saving the world, but they didn't want the charmed ones to suffer so they erased all there memories of Chris. Does Chris still have his wtch powers and if he does are they as strong as Wyatt? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

aw poor chris seisting to exist! :*( aw

Awesome Start!! cant wait to read more!

Jade

I really like this story. Am I right, that Chris was just not "made" that night in ghostly plane? And that's why he died accidentaly, and that's why Leo and sisters don't know about him? well, if I should be wrong about that then please explain it to me...*wink* And please update soon!
(Chrissy.W.x, member of the crazyDFFgang)