I have to say you did a great job with this, and the others. I laughed at the end about Kakashi and the Video Recorder.

Hey, this is Ani-chan from H&E. This story was awesome! "I cant wait to show this to your kids!" best line ever, that seriously made me crack up. there were some grammar problems, but the story was great anyway. You should make another fic about their children, have a referent back to Painful Birthday in it. Anyway, great job. cant wait to see other stuff from you. ^^

'I can't wait to show this to your kids' XD You HAVE to make another one with their kids and that tape XD I love all three^^ I'm looking forward for 4th one!

good stuff man!

I have read all your stories. This is a great story, and I absolutely loved it. Well, one thing...When Naruto asked Sakura to marry him, you could have made Sakura a bit more emotional, like have her cry out of happiness and such, but I still love this story, and your other 2 stories. You say this is your last Painful Birthday, but I do hope that you write way more than this. You are an excellent writer. Like one of your reviewers suggested, add a wedding fic or something. That might be good. Good luck in the future!

KICKASS!!

Hi, this is Shriner from H&E. I apologize for being so slow in reviewing your fic.

I really enjoyed reading it. It's fits well within your series. Overall, the descirption was pretty good. I was able to form a get picture of what was going on. The characterization was also good, though Kabuto seems a bit more sadistic than I remember.

On Grammar: there weren't very many spelling errors (I only saw two (kyubi should be Kyuubi and lieing should be lying)). However, you were also right in that it needs work. Specifically, you need to work on your sentence structure and phrasing. I noticed a significant number of run-ons and comma splices. I also thought that the phrasing was rather awkward in a number places. The other thing to be careful about is verb tense.

That was awsome. You sure that the ending was serious? I was laughing.

Good work

Good story. Too bad about Tsunade but at least Naruto will be Hokage. Orochimaru got what he deserved and Naruto and Sakura will live happily ever after.

Not bad. Maybe you should throw in a wedding fic, where along the way, Naruto finds out that the Fourth Hokage was his father.