 LOTR_junkie 2009-10-28 . chapter 11 That's hilarious. I loved Death Note, and Flying Pot-kun is the perfect person to kill math. But don't you have to imagine the face of the person you are killing, when you write down the name? |
 Miu Egao 2008-10-31 . chapter 11HAHA~! just have to love kakeru and death note~!
hope you add more soon~! |
 Hiroko Yamashita 2008-06-26 . chapter 11Hey! It's been a while (Heh, as if it's not my fault. -.-;)! I actually haven't read any Furuba fanfics for a long while so it was a very pleasant surprise to find an alert thingy for this story in my e-mail (Which I need to check way more often)! ^_^
Now, on to the story! Though I've yet to actually read/watch Death Note, I've heard enough about it to at least partially appreciate the wonderful absurdity of this drabble. The thought of Nabe-chan finding THAT notebook and using it for homework of all things makes me giggle. xD "That was the day math died." Hee hee, I love that line.
Good job writing another great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! ^_^ |
 MysticSorceror 2008-05-15 . chapter 11Things I liked:
I love how he thinks it could possibly be dangerous
Lol nice end
Is the book about a fic you're writing
Well I finally reviewed all of your Fruits Basket work, don't know whether to be happy or sad 0.o
But ganbatte!
~Myst |
 MysticSorceror 2008-05-13 . chapter 10Things I liked:
I love how Kaki-kun believes that to be one of the best days of his life
Oh god, I kinda know what's going to happen - that's down right funny
Wow, poor Yuki having to experience something like that
I loved it
~Myst
Things that I didn't like:
o.O he lives with his father? - maybe you know better than me |
 MysticSorceror 2008-05-11 . chapter 9Things I liked:
I love the personification of the alarm clock
I bet Kaki-kun is cute when he wakes up
Pretty funny chapter
~Myst
Things that I didn't like:
The line: Kakeru grumbled loudly as he the annoying alarm rang noisily" sounds a bit off to me |
 MysticSorceror 2008-05-10 . chapter 8Things I liked:
Aww these two are such a cute couple ^_^
I love the saying about kind people - but then I'm obsessed with Haru
Love the ending word - really not sure why o.O
Ways to improve:
The diction could be strengthened if you think about the character a little more - really nothing but I haven't given you any thing in
Liked it again
~Myst
Things that I didn't like:
Gently caressed the feeling of the wet (this is a little odd phrasing to me) |
 MysticSorceror 2008-05-10 . chapter 7Things I liked:
I really like the interaction between these two
The end is really funny - I wonder how people reacted to that
Ways to improve:
Isn't it froze instead of frozen?
Good work
~Myst
Things that I didn't like:
Not too fond of the repeated d's on and
I'm surprised Yuki didn't take the chance to call Kaki-kun a girl |
 MysticSorceror 2008-05-10 . chapter 6Things I liked:
I love how Kaki-kun can tell who ends up with who
Nice end
Really cute
~Myst |
 MysticSorceror 2008-05-09 . chapter 5Things I liked:
I like the father-stealing idea
I like how he stands by her as an older brother - it's cute
Cute end - I like this couple
Nice work
~Myst |
 MysticSorceror 2008-05-08 . chapter 4Things I liked:
I really like hearing about how Kaki-kun was raised
Aww poor Yuki really is like a deer
I really like the emotions mentioned at their meeting
Aww this makes me feel so sad for the loss of the Yuki-Haru friendship, god that ox did so much for him
The ending is really cute I really do like this friendship
Ways to improve:
Try not to repeat words or phrases
Great work but now I feel sad for Haru
~Myst |
 MysticSorceror 2008-05-07 . chapter 3Things I liked:
I love the repetition of the question and the responses
Wow nice ending and I like the mention of the two guys
Great work
~Myst |
 MysticSorceror 2008-05-06 . chapter 2Things I liked:
Good prompt and I really like the internal thoughts
Really nice characterization on Kakeru-kun
It was short but I liked just how much it really captured Kaki-kun
I loved it
~Myst |
 xPhoenix0Returnx 2008-04-09 . chapter 11MATH? xD Wow...that is so...you. o__ |
 Hiroko Yamashita 2008-01-20 . chapter 10OH NOES! Cross dressing Nabe-chan returns! The Horror! X_X (Actually, you're right, he probably wouldn't look half bad.)
Ha, I love your crack. I can just imagine Yun-chan's expression. Not to mention Machi and Nao's reactions. XD Oh, detention. Poor Nabe-chan, if only he had a reckless cousin with a split personality to defend him (Since it worked so well for Momiji. ;D).
Sorry I didn't review sooner! I've somehow turned into an extremely lazy person who hardly reviews even when she likes a story. Anyways, I hope to see more Furuba fics from you soon! I'll try to review those sooner than I did this one. ^^; |