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LOTRjunkie 10/28/09 . chapter 11
That's hilarious. I loved Death Note, and Flying Pot-kun is the perfect person to kill math. But don't you have to imagine the face of the person you are killing, when you write down the name?
S. Buttons 10/31/08 . chapter 11
HAHA! just have to love kakeru and death note!
hope you add more soon!
Hiroko Yamashita 6/26/08 . chapter 11
Hey! It's been a while (Heh, as if it's not my fault. -.)! I actually haven't read any Furuba fanfics for a long while so it was a very pleasant surprise to find an alert thingy for this story in my e-mail (Which I need to check way more often)! _

Now, on to the story! Though I've yet to actually read/watch Death Note, I've heard enough about it to at least partially appreciate the wonderful absurdity of this drabble. The thought of Nabe-chan finding THAT notebook and using it for homework of all things makes me giggle. xD "That was the day math died." Hee hee, I love that line.
Good job writing another great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! _
MysticSorceror 5/15/08 . chapter 11
Things I liked
I love how he thinks it could possibly be dangerous

Lol nice end
Is the book about a fic you're writing

Well I finally reviewed all of your Fruits Basket work, don't know whether to be happy or sad 0.o

But ganbatte!

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MysticSorceror 5/13/08 . chapter 10
Things I liked
I love how Kaki-kun believes that to be one of the best days of his life

Oh god, I kinda know what's going to happen that's down right funny

Wow, poor Yuki having to experience something like that

I loved it

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Things that I didn't like
o.O he lives with his father? maybe you know better than me
MysticSorceror 5/11/08 . chapter 9
Things I liked
I love the personification of the alarm clock

I bet Kaki-kun is cute when he wakes up

Pretty funny chapter

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Things that I didn't like
The line: Kakeru grumbled loudly as he the annoying alarm rang noisily" sounds a bit off to me
MysticSorceror 5/10/08 . chapter 8
Things I liked
Aww these two are such a cute couple _

I love the saying about kind people but then I'm obsessed with Haru

Love the ending word really not sure why o.O

Ways to improve
The diction could be strengthened if you think about the character a little more really nothing but I haven't given you any thing in
Liked it again

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Things that I didn't like
Gently caressed the feeling of the wet (this is a little odd phrasing to me)
MysticSorceror 5/10/08 . chapter 7
Things I liked
I really like the interaction between these two

The end is really funny I wonder how people reacted to that

Ways to improve
Isn't it froze instead of frozen?

Good work

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Things that I didn't like
Not too fond of the repeated d's on and

I'm surprised Yuki didn't take the chance to call Kaki-kun a girl
MysticSorceror 5/10/08 . chapter 6
Things I liked
I love how Kaki-kun can tell who ends up with who

Nice end

Really cute

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MysticSorceror 5/9/08 . chapter 5
Things I liked
I like the father-stealing idea
I like how he stands by her as an older brother it's cute

Cute end I like this couple

Nice work

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MysticSorceror 5/8/08 . chapter 4
Things I liked
I really like hearing about how Kaki-kun was raised

Aww poor Yuki really is like a deer

I really like the emotions mentioned at their meeting

Aww this makes me feel so sad for the loss of the Yuki-Haru friendship, god that ox did so much for him

The ending is really cute I really do like this friendship

Ways to improve
Try not to repeat words or phrases

Great work but now I feel sad for Haru

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MysticSorceror 5/7/08 . chapter 3
Things I liked
I love the repetition of the question and the responses

Wow nice ending and I like the mention of the two guys

Great work

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MysticSorceror 5/6/08 . chapter 2
Things I liked
Good prompt and I really like the internal thoughts

Really nice characterization on Kakeru-kun

It was short but I liked just how much it really captured Kaki-kun

I loved it

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xPhoenix0Returnx 4/9/08 . chapter 11
MATH? xD Wow...that is so...you. o_
Hiroko Yamashita 1/20/08 . chapter 10
OH NOES! Cross dressing Nabe-chan returns! The Horror! X_X (Actually, you're right, he probably wouldn't look half bad.
Ha, I love your crack. I can just imagine Yun-chan's expression. Not to mention Machi and Nao's reactions. XD Oh, detention. Poor Nabe-chan, if only he had a reckless cousin with a split personality to defend him (Since it worked so well for Momiji. ;D).
Sorry I didn't review sooner! I've somehow turned into an extremely lazy person who hardly reviews even when she likes a story. Anyways, I hope to see more Furuba fics from you soon! I'll try to review those sooner than I did this one. ;
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