That's hilarious. I loved Death Note, and Flying Pot-kun is the perfect person to kill math. But don't you have to imagine the face of the person you are killing, when you write down the name?

HAHA~! just have to love kakeru and death note~!

hope you add more soon~!

Hey! It's been a while (Heh, as if it's not my fault. -.-;)! I actually haven't read any Furuba fanfics for a long while so it was a very pleasant surprise to find an alert thingy for this story in my e-mail (Which I need to check way more often)! ^_^

Now, on to the story! Though I've yet to actually read/watch Death Note, I've heard enough about it to at least partially appreciate the wonderful absurdity of this drabble. The thought of Nabe-chan finding THAT notebook and using it for homework of all things makes me giggle. xD "That was the day math died." Hee hee, I love that line.

Good job writing another great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! ^_^

Things I liked:
I love how he thinks it could possibly be dangerous
Lol nice end
Is the book about a fic you're writing

Well I finally reviewed all of your Fruits Basket work, don't know whether to be happy or sad 0.o
But ganbatte!
~Myst

Things I liked:
I love how Kaki-kun believes that to be one of the best days of his life
Oh god, I kinda know what's going to happen - that's down right funny
Wow, poor Yuki having to experience something like that

I loved it
~Myst

Things that I didn't like:
o.O he lives with his father? - maybe you know better than me

Things I liked:
I love the personification of the alarm clock
I bet Kaki-kun is cute when he wakes up

Pretty funny chapter
~Myst

Things that I didn't like:
The line: Kakeru grumbled loudly as he the annoying alarm rang noisily" sounds a bit off to me

Things I liked:
Aww these two are such a cute couple ^_^
I love the saying about kind people - but then I'm obsessed with Haru
Love the ending word - really not sure why o.O

Ways to improve:
The diction could be strengthened if you think about the character a little more - really nothing but I haven't given you any thing in

Liked it again
~Myst

Things that I didn't like:
Gently caressed the feeling of the wet (this is a little odd phrasing to me)

Things I liked:
I really like the interaction between these two
The end is really funny - I wonder how people reacted to that

Ways to improve:
Isn't it froze instead of frozen?

Good work
~Myst

Things that I didn't like:
Not too fond of the repeated d's on and
I'm surprised Yuki didn't take the chance to call Kaki-kun a girl

Things I liked:
I love how Kaki-kun can tell who ends up with who
Nice end

Really cute
~Myst

Things I liked:
I like the father-stealing idea
I like how he stands by her as an older brother - it's cute
Cute end - I like this couple

Nice work
~Myst

Things I liked:
I really like hearing about how Kaki-kun was raised
Aww poor Yuki really is like a deer
I really like the emotions mentioned at their meeting
Aww this makes me feel so sad for the loss of the Yuki-Haru friendship, god that ox did so much for him
The ending is really cute I really do like this friendship

Ways to improve:
Try not to repeat words or phrases

Great work but now I feel sad for Haru
~Myst

Things I liked:
I love the repetition of the question and the responses
Wow nice ending and I like the mention of the two guys

Great work
~Myst

Things I liked:
Good prompt and I really like the internal thoughts
Really nice characterization on Kakeru-kun
It was short but I liked just how much it really captured Kaki-kun

I loved it
~Myst

MATH? xD Wow...that is so...you. o__

OH NOES! Cross dressing Nabe-chan returns! The Horror! X_X (Actually, you're right, he probably wouldn't look half bad.)

Ha, I love your crack. I can just imagine Yun-chan's expression. Not to mention Machi and Nao's reactions. XD Oh, detention. Poor Nabe-chan, if only he had a reckless cousin with a split personality to defend him (Since it worked so well for Momiji. ;D).

Sorry I didn't review sooner! I've somehow turned into an extremely lazy person who hardly reviews even when she likes a story. Anyways, I hope to see more Furuba fics from you soon! I'll try to review those sooner than I did this one. ^^;