 LOTRjunkie 10/28/09 . chapter 11 That's hilarious. I loved Death Note, and Flying Pot-kun is the perfect person to kill math. But don't you have to imagine the face of the person you are killing, when you write down the name? |
 S. Buttons 10/31/08 . chapter 11HAHA! just have to love kakeru and death note!
hope you add more soon! |
 Hiroko Yamashita 6/26/08 . chapter 11Hey! It's been a while (Heh, as if it's not my fault. -.)! I actually haven't read any Furuba fanfics for a long while so it was a very pleasant surprise to find an alert thingy for this story in my e-mail (Which I need to check way more often)! _
Now, on to the story! Though I've yet to actually read/watch Death Note, I've heard enough about it to at least partially appreciate the wonderful absurdity of this drabble. The thought of Nabe-chan finding THAT notebook and using it for homework of all things makes me giggle. xD "That was the day math died." Hee hee, I love that line.
Good job writing another great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! _ |
 MysticSorceror 5/15/08 . chapter 11Things I liked
I love how he thinks it could possibly be dangerous
Lol nice end
Is the book about a fic you're writing
Well I finally reviewed all of your Fruits Basket work, don't know whether to be happy or sad 0.o
But ganbatte!
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 MysticSorceror 5/13/08 . chapter 10Things I liked
I love how Kaki-kun believes that to be one of the best days of his life
Oh god, I kinda know what's going to happen that's down right funny
Wow, poor Yuki having to experience something like that
I loved it
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o.O he lives with his father? maybe you know better than me |
 MysticSorceror 5/11/08 . chapter 9Things I liked
I love the personification of the alarm clock
I bet Kaki-kun is cute when he wakes up
Pretty funny chapter
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The line: Kakeru grumbled loudly as he the annoying alarm rang noisily" sounds a bit off to me |
 MysticSorceror 5/10/08 . chapter 8Things I liked
Aww these two are such a cute couple _
I love the saying about kind people but then I'm obsessed with Haru
Love the ending word really not sure why o.O
Ways to improve
The diction could be strengthened if you think about the character a little more really nothing but I haven't given you any thing in
Liked it again
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Gently caressed the feeling of the wet (this is a little odd phrasing to me) |
 MysticSorceror 5/10/08 . chapter 7Things I liked
I really like the interaction between these two
The end is really funny I wonder how people reacted to that
Ways to improve
Isn't it froze instead of frozen?
Good work
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Not too fond of the repeated d's on and
I'm surprised Yuki didn't take the chance to call Kaki-kun a girl |
 MysticSorceror 5/10/08 . chapter 6Things I liked
I love how Kaki-kun can tell who ends up with who
Nice end
Really cute
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 MysticSorceror 5/9/08 . chapter 5Things I liked
I like the father-stealing idea
I like how he stands by her as an older brother it's cute
Cute end I like this couple
Nice work
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 MysticSorceror 5/8/08 . chapter 4Things I liked
I really like hearing about how Kaki-kun was raised
Aww poor Yuki really is like a deer
I really like the emotions mentioned at their meeting
Aww this makes me feel so sad for the loss of the Yuki-Haru friendship, god that ox did so much for him
The ending is really cute I really do like this friendship
Ways to improve
Try not to repeat words or phrases
Great work but now I feel sad for Haru
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 MysticSorceror 5/7/08 . chapter 3Things I liked
I love the repetition of the question and the responses
Wow nice ending and I like the mention of the two guys
Great work
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 MysticSorceror 5/6/08 . chapter 2Things I liked
Good prompt and I really like the internal thoughts
Really nice characterization on Kakeru-kun
It was short but I liked just how much it really captured Kaki-kun
I loved it
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 xPhoenix0Returnx 4/9/08 . chapter 11MATH? xD Wow...that is so...you. o_ |
 Hiroko Yamashita 1/20/08 . chapter 10OH NOES! Cross dressing Nabe-chan returns! The Horror! X_X (Actually, you're right, he probably wouldn't look half bad.
Ha, I love your crack. I can just imagine Yun-chan's expression. Not to mention Machi and Nao's reactions. XD Oh, detention. Poor Nabe-chan, if only he had a reckless cousin with a split personality to defend him (Since it worked so well for Momiji. ;D).
Sorry I didn't review sooner! I've somehow turned into an extremely lazy person who hardly reviews even when she likes a story. Anyways, I hope to see more Furuba fics from you soon! I'll try to review those sooner than I did this one. ; |