Excellent and please write more thanks.

Cool story and please update soon thanks.

Great episode as always. Had a few interesting twists and looking forward to seeing where they go. I really liked Wesley going off on how childish Angel and Spike's relationship has become. I can see him sometime down the line really just going off on them both. I also got a kick out of the Tigger and Eeyore line. I took it as being Tess actually referring to Spike (Tigger) and Angel (Eeyore). Not sure if it was meant that way though.

Just one thing that really stood out as needing corrected. Just after Spike had his morning visit by Tess, at the start of the paragraphs where Angel is waiting for Lisa to answer her door, you seem to have had Tess on the mind because multiple times you say Tess when you meant Lisa. It's only those first two paragraphs though.

Cool please update soon thanks.

Interesting and please update soon thanks.

Interesting story so please update soon thank you.

finally an update , i have been w8ing 4 one , thanx alot

Excellent chapter as always. There are a few places thoughout where there's a little confusion with pronouns, most likely typos, ie he being used when it's referring to Emma.

Both parts were fun. It's always interesting to see how things might ended up different. Little brushes with an alternate universe are always fun to read, and leave you wondering what happened in the AU after the stories over, or things like what the conversation between Wes and Conner might have went on to if Tick hadn't came back as soon. But then there is always a chance for a return to or visit by the AU. In this case there is still a broken Old one in the AU, so anything is possible.

still reading , & still totally like it ,there is just one thing that is really getting on my nerves,which is emma's absolute power, i mean ok i get it she is unigue & all,& i accept this fact but even champions have their downs & ups ,& even if she is unique i believe connor is as unique as her having both his parents vamps while emma only her father while her mother is human slayer & it was mentioned in season 7 of buffy that robbin whose mother was a slayer has absolutely no power , so if emma is that powerful then connor must be more powerful than her or at least her equal. sorry it took me so long,it is just this point has always troubled me ever since her return from quortoth ,&thanx for the updates

that was wonderful, i was very happy to findout that connor didn't betray them & finally zachery is dead & everything made sense, hope emma will get over it soon, thax 4 the update

oh u r so evil lol,i can't w8 to see if connor will really betray angel, u have to update son

this chap was wonderful , i totally liked ,can't w8 to c wat will connor do with zacher plz update soon

Love the story always look forward to when another is posted. Hope to see many more. Loved Harmony's intro scene btw, had me in stitches.

Considering the flow and premise of this episode I can see why Lisa didn't make an appearance, but after the earthquake it would have been nice if it was at least mentioned that someone had checked on her or talked to her to make sure she was ok.

Saw one little editing error. The part where Harmony sees the kid, Henry, in the mausolem and says "Oh hi," you call him Mathew instead.

Great characterization as always. I also like how everyone focuses and worries about Emma, when really Connor is as much or more screwed up. Wondering how Connor found Zachery's apartment though.

Really looking forward to see how this season will end up being all tied together or at least the parts intended to be tied up by in this season.

thax 4 the update , ur story is absolutely wonderful & goodluck with the award

i really liked this ch. the conversation between angel & connor was nice , also the whole imposter thing was terrific , i also like connor saving emma for a change, as a whole a gr8 chapter & really well written