kinda seems wanting of a follow up story or at least a epilogue. Good story you have a general handle on the relationships between the characters, but not so much on the inner thoughts of the characters and the ways they would react. You also interject some of your own personalty into the characters. Some of the sports references were a little unnecessary. I would suggest that you look a little closer at Kim in the third season and possibly the episodes "blush" and "the Ron factor" from season 2 and maybe even "crush" from season 1 for a better grip on the attitudes of Kim towards Ron during the time period suggested by the story.

I love how you just capture Ron with the weird off topic thought after a series of meaningful ones it is very much the way Ron thinks and part of what makes him funny. Keep up the good work.

ok, 1st of all, u NEED to stop with the red sox hazing...i mean sieriously(?) what made you hate them so much?

and second, you know what pair-up i havent seen alot of? S/R. do you know of anyone who writes them together?

Once again, the guy who is probably my favorite KP author has me in stitches. Keep it up!

Let's get to the important stuff first. The C's don't need Kevin Garnett to make it to the playoffs. They'll get there because ... because ... because we've got a time machine to take us back to the early 80s. Okay, file that under "we've got nuthin'." I'll readily conceded the past is the only place the Beantown Cagers are going to be enjoying any hoops glory in the foreseeable future. Sigh.

Nice chapter. Your take on K/R shipping is fun to read (and well written, too).

FINALLY!! Another bone-jangling, sports-tackling update by the-in his own words-cool at being uncool author known as S-Chrome(notice that during the 'cool' dialogue, CMY had no idea what he was talking about).

Ah, detention. The place for all educational evil-doers everywhere. But like the Justice system, it can't detain 'em forever.
Thank God for that...
Also, notice that S-Chrome is-impressively and disturbingly-highly knowledgeable of American High School enviroments...

Hey, the JP movies weren't that bad! What's bad about seeing hunters being hunted and eaten like raw burger?
Note to self: Conceal sadism...

Heheheheh. Typical that Ron would have no idea what that FPS-gamer slang term is...
Useless Trivia: In London, the word 'fag' means ciggarette. In the States, it means something else...

Eh, I don't think the White House pays it's war veterans. 'Expendable', remember?
Hopefully, the Lieutanent will never know I said that...

Jesus, enough with the time-length descriptions, you're dredging up terrible memories for me! Not that I've ever been to detention...(Southern Accent) I never 'urt nobody...I been a good boy.
Okay, I really got to stop watching Clint Eastwood films...

Kim,Kim,Kim. If only she knew that everyone else already anticipated that she'll realize how important her Ron-shine is to her...
For another fanfic involving Ronshine, see spectre triple-six 's 'It's Addictive: Take Two'.

Oh, you're good. I've never been impressed with the Giants...to bad for your State, S-Chrome...

You forgot being blasted to paint with a 12.7mm Dushka anti-air cannon, but never mind...

Okay, this is really wierd. Steve Barkin, the big bad marine, giving advice on teenage love problems!?
Maybe that's why he joined the Army...which was a mistake...

'Innuendo'. Puh-lease. Just another term film-makers created in a desperate attempt to reel foolish fish,er, film-watchers back into the cinema.

This story's gonna be reeaall good. Bring on more Awkward moments, please! And a dash of gunpowder, thank you very much, my good man...

CMY, still somehow the long-winded guy.

P.S. Geez, what have you got against Boston sports teams!? Just because you're from New York!? Or is it because they really, reeaallyy stink?
To all Boston fans, I apologize...actually I don't.

P.P.S. Seen Slyrr 's latest story?

I had almost forgotten how DAMN FUNNY your stories are. Thanks for the reminder, S-Chrome! You rock!

Poor Kim! Again in detention. I bet she never expected to be back in that place after the incident back during "Tick, Tick, Tick". Although this time I bet it was more bearable since her Ron was making her company. So she probably didn't mind at all.

And Kim kissing Ron when detention time was over? Wow, she REALLY can do anything! Especially if Barkin was looking at that moment! You go, Possible! ;)

By the way, is it only me or do you just LOVE sports? XD

Kim's flirting and Ron may get a clue of this as he ponders, well whatever he ponders...

CB73

Oh, this is gonna be good...upload the next chapter, dammit!
I had a big smile on my face during the entire reading of this chapter. DAMN, this is good! PLEASE post the next chapter! PLEASE!
I really loved the narrative here. Who woud have thought that the most hilarious person in this entire fanfic would be the author himself? This story is something special...
I'll have another chapter, please. Extra cheese and hold the onions.

CMY

P.S. Man, I'd love to have a friend like Monique...she's such a likable character with her wierd language and her almost-sneaky insight of her friends' character. The world needs more people like Monique...
P.P.S. Your definition of the word "powerless"...I was powerless against your funny-bone tickler...

;p ;D

MK2

Kim in mission mode can't bode well for Ron and Tara's evening. "How dare he, he should have known." Why is it all women assume men can read minds?

Hello, sports-loving KP fans (or is that KP-loving sports fans)!

Are we seeing a repeat of Yankees v. Red Sox, circa 2004, in which the mighty, supposedly undefeatable colossus (Kim) is defeated by the scrappy underdog (Tara)

or ...

Are we seeing the same match-up unfold, circa one year earlier, in which the storied dynasty with a track record of success (Kim) will prevail over the hapless underdog (Tara)
Sports and KP fans want to know!

And, yes, the ads were disappointing, to say the least.

Hm I'm betting it was Kim, since Ron doesn't have a Kimmunicator. Unless, that is, they're both still on the plane. But then again, Ron wasn't asleep...or was he? Ow, major brain pain.

"Note: Serious face."

A page has been torn from the 'Book of Ron'!
I can see the jealousy in Kim going to moodulated heights without a moodulator in sight. Having Mo there was just the icing on the cake.
Thanks for the great read!

Nice job, it is making anixous to get back to the main story.

Hope to be able to read it soon.

Thanks