A peice about Alice's change. Very good work. :)

icky. angst doesn't taste very good. lmao. jk. i liked the chapter a lot. update soon!

its great...cant wait to see where it goes from here

and btw

i just finished millie

i was muzzy and my god...i must have been one of the youngest people in the cast...

figure that one out!

but ya have fun with the readthrough...its a great show

Yay! I like this. Update again soon :)

:O Thank you for mentioning me :)

This chapter was also very good _ Lol. It's starting to get more into the heart of Alice's story. UPdate soon!

Skool suxs! I hope u update when u can!

NllieGURL

Bravo! Please update soon _

I Like the name Nathaniel. Glad that you updated and hope that you continue to do so.

Does the pale guy ever talk to Alice? Love the story, update soon.

I like how you've made her entrys as 'date unknown' and kept the entries short and too the point. It makes it seem more realistic.

Again, am looking forward to your next update

Very interesting. Please continue _

Wow. Evil vampire janior...grr...! She finally saw Jasper...! YAH! GO ALICE AND JASPER! Hurry and write more! It rocks!

This story is very interesting! But why would Alice's parents fake her death? Don't they LOVE her? Update soon.

Poor Alice...this is heartbreaking! But I would love to read more so please WRITE MORE SOON!

Sounds good, I like the way you've written alice so far. Looking forward to the next update.