There...just aren't words enough to express how I feel right now...but I'll try my best! XD

Wow. I haven't come across very many well-written NaruSakus here, but this one definitely ranks high. I'm a little afraid to delve into TP (and won't do it now because it's nearly 1 in the morning and I've got class tomorrow at 11 and, let's be honest, college makes you want to sleep in) but I'll beard the lion in its den eventually ^^ GREAT JOB on this fic, I really loved how you characterized Naruto, and his whiskers. Loved his whiskers.

Aria

great story

This story is really good! It's hard to find decent Naruto/Sakura.

Kinda crazy reading this after the most Naruto chapter and Naruto responds a very similar way. Love your work.

Awesome story!It's one of the best NaruSaku stories in FF!I've seen how many reviews it has and I instantly understood that it's AWESOME!I mean there are other stories that have 40 chapters and their reviews barely made it to 200,and here is yours a 5-chapter story with 319 reviews!!It's...It's...WOW.I've just read chapter 1 and i'm going for chapter 2 as soon as i finish my review!Keep making AWESOME stories!!Thanks for the upload!!

Dimitra

I've been reading your stories lately, and I love how you write Naruto's character- it's still true to him but also showing a mature side of him. and the NaruSaku love in this is HOT! great writing.

This so happens to be one of the best reads Ive had on (and there's only a handful!) Your style of writing captivated me and the way you moved from scene to scene was like flowing water. And i thought the grind sex scene was very well written .

huh? what is the continuing story?!!

heY!! girl-dom is so a word! oh yeah! shows what you know. hmph and i am, like, totally not an idiot.

LOL

Awesome!

It was entertaining to say the least. I thought you nailed how the characters would react.

Well crud, I guess I have to go read Troika Parallel huh? And that means I'll have to read Millennium too.

Oh well, guess I'll get to that sometime soon.

(Good story, once again.)

Okay, so I was gonna wait until I finished the whole story to review, but I felt the need to review this chapter in particular.

First things first, Wow. That was pretty raunchy. I had to scroll up to the top of the page to make sure that this was the same Shivakashi that wrote Medicinal Lullaby. I mean, damn. For what it's worth, I thought it was well written, but it's kind of hard for me to tell with this kind of subject matter. Kind of hard to focus on spelling, grammar and whatnot.

Second, the confrontation with Sakura's mom, I didn't really care for. It doesn't really have anything to do with your writing, since I've never cared for those kinds of scenes in fics and I have a tendency to just skip over them. I will say this though, I liked that in your scene Naruto didn't explode in anger at her, nor did he get all wangsty and on the verge of tears as seems to happen so often in scenes like this. So kudos to writing one of the better versions of a scene that I don't care for.

Now if you'll excuse me, I need to take a cold shower.

*mutters to himself* damn that's hot...

you know you're a brilliant writer when a devoted sasusaku fan (and writer) can appreciate narusaku. the writing style is amazing! i'm not praticularly privy to the pairing, but i do like it and you wrote it in a way so that they were completely in character despite their...ahem situations.

great work.