a sad but woderful story

This was so sad yet sweet at the end.

A wonderful story - thank you ... it made my eyes fill up

that was really cute but kinda sad, poor Grissom. His Grandma sounds like a **. hehehe. but it was really good.

Wow, that was a great story. So touching. Great job :)

wow. That was amazing. I thought you captured the charcters perfectly, there was just the right amount of everything.

I loved the mix of the past and the present in the middle. It was almost as though I could see the picture in my head, as if i was watching the show.

I also loved how Sara called Brass over to help move Grissom, and how Brass had his own story to do with Grissom's birthday thing.

This story was just amazing. Thank you for writing it!

Em,
-xox-

This was a was a beautifully written fic. I like the way you keep adding to Grissom's past. The way the flashbacks were interspersed throughout the piece was a nice touch. I look forward to more from you.

Hi again , loved this again sad , warm and cosy if you know what I mean sara comforting gil and this back story you've created is so believable if only the shows scrip writer's could do as well , please continue this series its briliant stuff , thanks

What an unbelievably fantastic way to tie baseball into the story!

Nicely done. :D

Powerful and sad story. Very well written. Poor little Gil.

Amazing!! I loved it!!
-mystical panther

This was so beautiful and moving. I could really feel Grissom's pain and guilt through your writing. And nobody uses flashbacks quite the way you do. There's still so much left of the little guy in the Big G.

That's so sad but I love it. I love backstory. Thank you for this very emotional story.

sweet and beautiful.

I love the story! Great job!