So lovely! [Some tense problems. Y'know, past, present.] Yuki and Ayame goodness, Akito and Yuki goodness, and of course the wonderful Kureno. Happy day!

I wanted to be the first one to review this chapter I'm glad I made it first!
this chapter was just so deep you made live inside
every character you mentioned here yuki,ayame,akito and kureno!
the way yuki felt hot and iretated at the bigening
and how ayame was hitting him with the fan you
made me feel hot too and went to swich the
air conditionar on! then how yuki said those words
and hurt ayame just breliant!
my favorite part was when kureno found yuki hiding
how you made yuki act is just genious!
and how kureno imagend what happend between yuki
and his so called mother T.T so sad!
and then talking a bout yuki's inocence and how he will never give up on his family he will always carry that littel spark of hope I think that was very true I rememberd when yuki's mother
came to his school in the real manga how yuki run after her inspite of the way she acted infront of his teacher I think yuki always had place for his parents if they decided to change^^
I love all the yuki/akito seens you write you just
manage them in a great way^^ and kureno is so sweet you didn't make him do anything special and yet with out him in this chapter it will surly lose some of it's beauty^^ I think that is how a great story shiuld be!
the end with yuki and ayame's brotherly bound made so happy! the moment was too sweet for words
and you manged it all the same^^
I'm glad I happen to be lucky enough to read your
stories! thank you so much for the great and wonderful chapter! I think I will review again some tim soon ^^ because shockingly I still have to say alot^^ I want to fit it in SOS time line^^

Finaly I got to review one of your wonderful stories! I've registerd today and just wanted to leave a review for you ^^ because I love your story seasons of sorrow so much! my favorite furuba fic ever the best one I've read to date!
so origenal and well writen and the characters
wow! you made me fall in love with yuki all over agine! just to let you know you make my day happy every time you update your story! thank you so
much!...thank you thank you thank you!
now for this side fic I didn't expect any lessfrom you ... just wonderful .. the seen with yuki and ren was so well writen I was holding my breath all the time! and the poisen turned out
to be fake! which is tipical of ren!
I love it! when I have the time I will review SOS
because I want to leave one for every chapter!
thanks again and good lucke!

I wondered if Ren would make another appearance, just as wicked as ever. I love how Hatori is so protective of Yuki, and can't help wondering what happened between the nezumi and Akito during those years after he became her first victom, and how and why Yuki came to live with Shigure. (I know in the manga it was because of Haru). I am always looking forward to new chapters of S.O.S., but almost enjoy your side fics. even more!

All kinds of interesting, and I like the writing style. Akito was a bit softened, and Ren a bit over-psycho, but the needs of the plot do call... And everyone else was pretty much brilliantly in character [i.e. Shigure... and he's so hard to do]. Admiration! I look forward to more from this story.