Clever, if a little short.

I like Nathan's "voice" of self-disgust in this story. It describes perfectly how I think he SHOULD have felt through the whole first season because let's face it: until the last ten minutes of 'How to Stop an Exploding Man', Nathan was an a-hole.

Nice insight into Nathan's thoughts.

Strangely enough, I understand Nathan's reasoning for making up a cover story. It's just the way he revealed it publicly which is disappointing. Much as I love Nathan, he can be SO clueless when it comes to people's feelings.

Impressive.

Aww, sad! Lovely job though.

Nathan doesn't know the meaning of brotherly love. The only one he loves is himself.

good. i like. :)