aw that was really good! Love kitty! Great description and writing style

it always ** me off to find something as good as this with so little feedback when it's so very brilliant. i mean, this is up with the few kyro fics i love, and i am like, the worse critic when it comes to those two.

you have john down perfectly and kitty is so sweet. i love the way you write them and your word flow is amazing. i'm incredibly jealous. you did an excellent job.

This was really, really good! I usually don't like John very much, but I did in this. Great job!

I just realized it said complete, is this the last chapter, if so is there gonna be a sequel. Great chapter. :)

Oh no, she ran away, that idiot, how could she become friends with him and get all close to him then realize that it could be wrong to be doing it? Good chapter. :)

Great chapter. Since you said John doesn't get to bathe, why doesn't Kitty say something about that? :)

This is ...WOW! I can't wait to see what else you come up with.
John and Kitty are my fav pairing ever.

I like your story. Please finish it soon. I want to know what happens. Thanks.

I loved this chapter! hurry up and write the next chapter!
luv this couple!
Shadow Cat

WOW.This is a really good story. I cant wait for the next chapter

Wow, this story seems excellent and unique. Please give us more!

I like the Kitty/John relationship and interactions here...keep it up!

Great chapter. Strawberries, how sweet, LOL. Keeping John in that cell with handcuffs burning into his wrists and no means to maintain personal hygiene doesn't sound like the X-Men. I thought they would put him in a room and put a camera and lock the door. Update soon. :)

I believed I left a comment on LJ, but I'll leave another here - I really like this fic, and the dynamic you have written of John and Kitty's relationship. I sense that this will be a little different, and I like that!

Can't wait to read more! :D

I like your originality. I hope you're a fast writer because I want to see where this is going.