Good job! On a scale from one to ten, I would give the story a seven or an eight.

This is sick sick sick. You need a new hobby woman. You are a loser at this one.

omg i loved it thnx for such a good story

what ending nice story

ok so I read this story days ago when it was first published! all I gotta say is one thing! NO! I cant believe it's all over! i luv this story so much! thanks for writing such a great story! please comeback with more or another story abour john/maria! u are frickin wonderful! i luv thi ending but i wish it never ended! athough like they say all good things must come to an end even though i wish this wasn't the case! i cant wait to read your next story and please come back with anoth john/ maria story becasue i absolutley luv ur stories! please write another please! thanks so much a hope to c u on the list again soon! thanks!

yah, john & maria finally got married! you had me worried there for a second it looked like john & trish were going to end up together. i added this stroy to my faves list.

plz update soon

uh oh wat'll happen nxt?

yay maria is free but oh no i cant believe dave would do this! i hope john is able to beat dave's gang! please update this wonderful story i gotta know what happens next! i love this story so much! please please please please update please! thanks!

this is so good i hope you finish this story you can't leave us hanging!no matter what type of story you write i'll read it! the story about the girl with aids sounds interesting i can't wait to read it you will you be posting ti here or somewhere else if so let me know where so i can read it!

Oh wow what is going to happen update soon

uh oh what'll happen nxt?

plz update soon!

omg thats sad update

OH MY GOSH WHAT HAPPENED TO JOHN? I GOTTA KNOW PLEASE UPDATE! I HOPE JOHN AND MARIA ARE OK AND I HOPE JOHN SAVES MARIA! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! I LOVE THIS STORY! THANKS!