incredibly incredibly well written, it's pretty cool,i like it.

think Envy is perfect. yay for envy!

.x poor envy T.T Good work!

Wow... Very nice insite into what Envy's thoughts are! _ This is exactly how I'd imagine him thinking, too! VERY WONDERFUL JOB! Talim*

I really liked the style this was written in, it was simple and to the point yet at the same time it wandered; and that made it feel realistic. great fic, plz write more like it.

Sabith

Great I loved it!

ChibiYinYangFox

Hm...

that was sort of sad...

poor Envy...

But well written, I liked it!

Wow...normally, I hate Envy with a passion, but I very much like this fanfiction. It has the disharmony of collective thoughts, fluttering about, twisting into one whole.

It's a very original concept for a story. Everyone always says Envy simply hates Ed because Hoenhiem loves Edward, but you've taken it a step further, making it a bit more touching.

Excellent work.

Poor Envy. *huggles*