The last paragraph with Howl's thoughts on Making love was very...playfully insightful...? Not sure how to describe it, but I enjoyed that tiny paragraph. Once again, very sweet anmd considerate. The details (especially the period clothes) were wonderful. You had a good balance of sex and narration/thoughts that made the whole peice rather tactful. Congrats on achieving that!

Now I shall have to go back and read the first 13 chapters, LOL.

Cute but impressively realistic. Wish more real life couples would take the time to talk like this. Aww, wishful thinking _ Wonderful so far. Keept it up.

As much as I love this movie, this is my second SxH fiction. It's awkward, though I enjoyed it, I still a, apprehensive about them being so... human.

It's really well-written, though )

aw, sweet AND lemony. a wonderful combination. i can't wait to see what happens next!

that was a very injoyable[sp sorry] story

UPDATE! i love it!

i loved both chapters almost got lost because i forgot that the second chapter in here was 15 anyway i loved it now i have read the rest i hope i finish it before 9

Two Words:

Absolutely Brilliant.

L.W.

WOW! OMG! INTENSE! HEHE! I love this is so awesome! But why no baby? I want baby...XD! Ok got to keep on reading to find out .!

This is so totally awesome! I just love everything you write and your plot for this story its totally amazing!

Well got to keep on reading! And awesome job! .

Hey one question is chappie 2 of this story the continuation of chappie 1? or of another chappie later on?

Well go to go figure it out! but if you are on right now plz help me with it...or ill go look XD! AWESOME chappie!

Both parts are very tastefully and well done, and part two is especially steamy! In part one I particularly liked Sophie's whole little dialogue about what she'd heard of sex, and the rambling way she did it. I could just hear the embarrassed breathlessness in her voice. This sort of open and equal discussion is very matter-of-fact and yet so important to the development of their relationship as you have it.

I really like how you've written the undressing scene in part two. Great reading overall. :)

I figured I may as well review here, since this story deserves reviews galore.

I usually hate M-rated Howl's Moving Castle stories because they're generally tastelessly done and are crude and completely out of character. However, yours manages to be explicit and yet soft and gentle at the same time. It's completely appropriate with the movie and its characters and goes a long way in developing the love between Sophie and Howl.

I especially enjoyed the bit about the Kama Sutra. Nice touch!

Many well-deserved kudos, Sakura. Well done!

Ebony

Perfect!

I really like this story. Howl is so patient with Sophie.

Your stories are wonderful! Please keep writing, I really enjoy them. Oh, and I thought your "A Year in the Life, Part Two" was both sexy, interesting, and done quite tastefully-which is not so easy to accomplish. Great job! *applause*