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Formerly Melodious
2009-08-01 . chapter 8
This story is amazing! Can't wait for the next chapter!
hollyivy7
2009-08-01 . chapter 6
aha. i can't do a pushup. or a situp.
Laughing The Night Away
2009-07-12 . chapter 3
LOLOL I so fell for that! Omg XD
it-princess
2009-06-17 . chapter 2
please tell me ur gonna continue.u could have dark and dai get 2gether after dark resuces dai from that argentine dude. Dark should ask 4 a kiss and daisuke complies. other suggestions are, having krad and sato b pissed @ dark and try 2 get dai 2 "submit" so dark'll leave them alone. when I think o' other stuff, i'll let ya kno.( not 2 sound pervy but, should b kinda steamy...*lewd grin*
it-princess
2009-06-16 . chapter 1
I really love this story. Normally the whole "yaoi" thing freaks me out, but, you have written this so well that I'm too entertained(aka: busy lmao) to b grossed out. I hope you post another chapter soon *suspense killing me*
The bit where you had Dark call Daisuke an Uke was hilarious.
You could describe the way that Krad and Satoshi are always at it by saying they "are like rabbits".
sweetpea12767
2009-03-29 . chapter 8
OMG! PLZ CONTINUE! it's awsome, and really funny :) DON'T KILL THE AWSOMENESS! GAH! *falls off of the chhiar she'd been standing on* hpth...
sweetpea12767
2009-03-28 . chapter 4
YAY! lolz loved it, must. keep. reading. :)
sweetpea12767
2009-03-28 . chapter 2
lol
sweetpea12767
2009-03-28 . chapter 1
YAY! PERVERTEDNESS! lolz :) ur really good, lolz this should be interesting XD
bakedbrownie
2009-03-26 . chapter 8
Oh. my GOD. -pardon the languague- But I just read the entire fic so far in one sit down -my eyeballs are on strike now- And I gotta tell you, I haven't laughed so hard because of a fic in a LONG TIME.

I think it was in chapter seven (Too lazy to check)but the hong ching pow thing had me ROLLING. Oh, and the whole, "I'll rape you little boy." Which probably isn't SUPPOSED to be funny, but I giggled, so who cares. KUDOS. And the sweater vest thing - okay, you know what? Forget it. I like everything in this fic, I like every chapter so far.

And though it might be a long way off, I really can't wait for Daisuke and Dark to get together.

So, THANK YOU, for writing Why the Caged Bird Sings. Totally made my day. -bows-
BloodyWar2411
2009-03-24 . chapter 8
Awesomeness! Write more soon, please! Is Daisuke close to letting Dark fuck him? The suspence is killing me! Also, hilarious chapter. My favorite one yet, well, besides the one where Dark kisses him.
uchihababe-chan
2008-12-25 . chapter 8
i love this story i really hope daisuke and dark end up happy !
Rethena Tydnalli
2008-12-16 . chapter 8
Can you finish this? You said you would, but its been a year!
anit0523
2008-11-30 . chapter 8
Oh...My...God...

So here i am reading this long fanfic instead of writing the three stupid essays that HAVE to be done. Im SO glad that i got to the 8th chapter because that means that there is no more to read. So i can get some work done. Seriously. YOU ARE HELPING ME SHIRK MY RESPONSIBILITIES! What do you have to say for your self?

But seriously. This is an awesome story! XD Im not generally one for a perverse tale such as this, but its so funny that i just plain dont care about the explicit jokes.
Best parts:
-Ditsy Risa, Ditsy Dark, and the closet.
-Dai talking to magezine.
-I -heart- Dark
-Chris *shudder*
-Dai getting PWN'd by footballs. (thats not funny, but in my mind it appeared as a random slapdash sort of thing)
-and way too many best parts for me to remember.

And a cliffhanger. D: AGGHH cliffhangers. Ive noticed that this hasn't been updated in nearly a year now, and i know you said that you wouldn't abandon this fic, so im hoping that there may be another chapter soon. Meanwhile, i have come to admire your writing style (because your thoughts mirror mine in a way that i could not begin to understand). I may check out some of your other stories.

Oh by the way, i support yor use of minor characters (like Keija Saga and friends) because they dont get enough attention. I think you should find a way to include Masahiro Sekimoto into the story, because he seems to all but dissappear from even the original story after just a few volumes... Wait.. You know who he is right? Please tell me you know who he is!? It seems like NOBODY even remembers him. T-T Not even Yukiru Sugisaki seems to care about hiim anymore.

Im big DNA fan, as well as well as a YGO fan, so your many stories are sure to amuse me. CRAP! I just noticed that i have one or two of your other stories in my faves already. XD Anyway, i hope to be reading this and others soon. Anyways, i gotta get this done. Seriously. (Ive gotta try not commit academic suicide now. Freakin' essays...) Later! :D Enjoy life!

Anit0523
Dark-Valentine
2008-11-17 . chapter 8
please update, this is one hellish cliff hanger...
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