That was so cute
I wish this happened at the end
The ending is SO sad, I can't help but cry

I really liked that. The end of Bare always makes me sob so I can never listen to it. That was a good rewritten ending for Bare that was real enough, not over bareingly sappy or unrealistically happy.

It was super sweet. Thank you for it.

SO CUTE!

If only...sob...

Really good! Loving the Bare!

*wibbles* That was sweet and adorable and just... Aw. Great job ^^

Aww that was good. I wish that's how it ended. I always sob at the end of Bare. =(

Aw! That was so great! YAY! ANOTHER BAREFIC WRITER!

Check out my C2. :)

That was a really really good story! Wow... I loved it. Keep writing more barefics!

~Meg (I Caught My Breath on the Bare Forums)

I like this. The dialogue is realistic and it's a fix-it fic without going entirely overboard. I mean, they still have to deal you've got a very hopeful ending without ignoring the issue of Ivy and the baby.