Please please please more, you're such a good writer

more please :)

can you keep continue this story? i hope so though. i love the idea. the plot is quite something. hhe. two-shoot is sound well though.

ive got one word for u girliiee,

HOTT.

looking for the next chapter soon!

what is there to say?wow, that's one scenerio that i've yet to come across. every element worked well, their actions conveyed their true thoughts and it ws great how you had everyone almost act on impulse, no second thoughts. i could see it happening right in front of me. how old is everyone though? is there age changes, more dramatic then the original characters ages?at first, i thought it was going to be a relationship between Itachi and Naruto, but when it turned out to be only a one-sided love, wow (hehe, it's wonderful how smut works in mysterious ways)please continue the story, i hafta know what happens

OMG!I LOVE IT!

ITS AWSOME!

Pleaz Post The Other Part Soon!

The Story's Just Awsome!

ooh...thats so sad...:(

D where is the second part? i want to know, want to know! P the suspense is killing me...

and you know, i think there's a yaoi manga exactly like this somewhere...cant remember the name off the top of my head, but i know it exists! it ends with a happy ending though you should check it out D

Poor Naruto, and poor Sasuke. I can't wait to read the second half. Please give my boys a happy ending.

aww..

heartbreaking.

but well-done.

really liked it.

i think it's brilliant.

..loves your fic.

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This realy remind me of this yaoi (or doujin..can' remeber..no I think it was yaoi haha) that I have read :B

like 2 parts of it combined. BUT ITS GOD

ITS GOD

KEEP IT UP

SASUNARU FTW

SASUNARU FTW

SASUNARU FTW

/shot

I like the premise of this story. It's different from what a lot of other authors are turning out. Vrey good writing, I like your style. I can't wait to find out what happens to Sasuke and Naruto. Having them get together would be cute and awesome, but it would be cliche. But having them never get together would just be cruel and it wouldn't be very satisfying for the readers and might not be satisfying for you as the author...

So all I can ask for is a realistic ending that you want to write. That would be cool and awesome. I really can't wait to find out, hope you update soon!

Please continue!

Update, pretty please!

Wow. So much fluff that I was blinded. _