 Lychee Green Tea 2008-06-25 . chapter 1Heheh, I had to re-read this before I went, "Ooh! Cool!" but that's just 'cause I'm really slow tonight. I really liked this. You definitely have a way with words, and I know I'd never be able to get my point across with just a few paragraphs. It was smart to keep it this short with your talented writing. Keep it up!
Take care,
~LGT |
 starchica 2006-11-04 . chapter 1Brilliant. I- you say so much with so little; I'm so jealous. My favorite line: "Leaning back against the tree, careful not to fall off the branch, he noticed a falling star; the word “meteor” was wholly unknown to him, though so soon Birdramon's wings would save his life." It made me think about the relationship between the other Digimon and the non-parter humans.
One little thing: I might be wrong about this, but I think that the adventure started the first day of camp. They weren't there the whole summer. If I remember correctly, during the Myotismon arc, Izzy says something about how much he's changed since camp, and his mom asks him how much he could have changed, since he was only there for half a day. But still, a very good story overall. |