Boy-oh-boy. Once again, you take a relatively simple storyline and turn it into this complex, intrigue-ridden epic wannabe. It's not bad to be this ambitious as far as storylines go, but bear in mind that there has to be a logical sequence of events. Zelda can be queen and possess the tri-force, but you'd better have a darn good reason as to why she got there, with that much power.

I'm only trying to offer my own meager experience, based off of my observations of what happens when fics go out of control. I suppose it's ironic to give this as my advice when you're the one who's telling this stuff to me, but one good turn deserves another. I await the next installment with breath abated...

What a nice reversal. The bad guy is good and the good girl is bad. By now, though, I'd expect no less.

Well, your writing is as strong as ever. Descriptions are good, fight scenes are good, humor is dry and sarcastic, storyline is deep and engaging.

The only weakness is grammar, of course. Your sentences tend to run-on, and there are misspellings throughout. It's really really minor, though. It doesn't matter either way if you choose to fix it, but it might be something to keep an eye on.

Anyway, that's my take.

woah, this is a good story.

Great chapter, things seem to becoming more interesting. I like how you're making Zelda seem both good and evil at the same time, leaving us guessing (for the most part). Did find a spelling error, but can't remember where. Eh, I'll find it later. Still want to know how Sheik figures in all this, and now how Rauru does. In other words, hurry up and post more! _

This is a good story and all but, dont take so damn long to update!

I hope you continue this story, because it's one of the most interesting ones I've read. Finally Zelda has a personality and isn't just the princess to be saved. Interesting new twists to the story as well, very good. )

Hey TW...Your style of writing inspires me to do more, and to write more. It's amazing when a reader like me starts reading great-quality fics like this and all the images start popping in my head. Well, that's the case here. And your storyline has a twist...I have rarely read something like this...Looks like Zelda is being the bad girl here...keep writing and read my fics in your free time!

Glad to see the butt-kicking paid off. ;D Excellent addition, my friend, most excellent. I love how you give the characters such depth...you know, so that they're (gasp!) real people instead of the cardboard cut-outs that are clogging up this section here at FFN. Keep it comin'.

Aaahhh! Too...many...people...to keep track...of. Summing...up...ten years in several paragraphs...Evil Zelda...It has potential, really, and There will no doubt be several large battles-hopefully excessivly violent ones-and near the end, a happy ending. Not bad, and keep it coming.

Hmmmmm...Interesting story. Most Interesting. Write some more soon.

Very, VERY cool. Wonderfully written, intriguing, and refreshing. Not generic, and VERY orginal. I love this! Please hurry on out with more! And one more thing... Kudos on separating Zel and Sheik. I love people capable of free thought. Congrats again! I'll be reviewing! Keep it up, WH! _

Wow. This is a shining example of how one small change can throw everything out of balance. Wonderful fic, please write more!

Its good. I like it, I knew that when Zelda got the Triforce, bad stuff was gonna happen. I pity Link. Hopefully he'll get his act together really quick. This has lots of potential for anything. Though I do ask it not to become Link/Shiek thing, I can't control it, and I won't stop reading, its just a request.

This is great! Like the premise, and the writing is superbly done.

Oooooooh! I love it! And the changed ending is good, too! I can't stand the suspense! You have to write more! Your a great author! Keep it up and post more!