I like it. Especially the end.

Amazing. One of the few oneshots I have ever loved. Keep writing, it is an amazing gift.

This was really good! I would never flame something like this. Unlike many others, I favor the Hermione/Draco pairing. They just seem sweeter to me. But this was really really good. I liked that part, "Something like admiration shines in his eyes." and the, "Oblivion again." That was nice.

Keep up the good work!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!! it made me so sad...and i love that...when a story/poem can make me feel what the character is feeling...and I love this plot with Draco and Hermione...this is amazingg.=]

Beautiful. I love it. Good job.

That is so cute.
And VERY well written :)

I do so hope you follow it up.
Because it's awesome.

Good job!