Lovely!

That was awesome! I loved the part when Rose was looking at the camera footage and she was told it was happening right now. xD
It was so fluffy. But so obvious for the Doctor to say some joke first then admit that he loved her. xD
Now only if he would do that in real life. :l

Its really good i like it
Cheers

Excellent

that was so so so so so god you have to write a sequal!! it is excellent please write a sequal!! it it just the best!! write a sequal!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE A SEQUAL!

omg that was absoloutely frickin' amazing! I couldn't have wished for a better post - doomsday story! well done, well done, well done! xx ;) xx

I love this line “…you stole my psychic paper you little madam!”
And I love the story.
SG

That was great are you gonna carry on with this or do a sequel or something and can you make it even fluffier between the Doctor and Rose.

Yay it's happy! Cute story, well done!
Jen x

aw, thats so good! :D is this a one-shot, or going to be a series? one thing, make sure you put some sort of divider when the scene changes, cause it can be very confusing at points, such as when jacks just showed the doctor what can get him back to rose, then suddenly someones complaining at him about nicking all the sarnies. but its just a small point. other than that, its great!!

MORE MORE MORE! What happens next? lol. Loved it, nice and long, only a few spelling mistakes and nothing completely OTT. Just one little helpful hint, use divider lines in between paragraphs especially when you were switching from the Doctor to Rose's POV. Otherwise great job!

I loved it. Although i was a bit cheesy - I think all Who-vians need that atm.

Well done

Nic x

beautiful!