really sad i feel bad for the girl. James should have been stronger.

woah, that was sad. I thought it mwuz max til it said 'feline', then I hardly got it. THAT WAS SO SAD!

Oh. My. God. That was genius. Disturbing and sad, but insanely well-written and magnificent. *applause*

I like it lots of feeling in it

That's sad. Amazing writing, but sad.

NO0O0O0O0O0O0O0O0!
There was finally a good man in the school and Batchelder shot him, ever since i've read SOF my views on Jeb have changed like when Max escaped Itex he said "Go sweetheart!" or something like that. but now I see him for the disgusting wad of crap that he is *spits on Jebs shoe, Jeb pulls out a revolver* Crap!

Chaos spear! *chaos spear hits Jeb in the stomach, knocking him out cold* Score one for the good guys!

Good job Illa!

The power of chaos is upon us.

The name says it all...

Whoa, damn!

Ah, the "whitecoat" fic... my favorite part of MR.

And there's some part of me that is somehow laughing so hard about this fic. I have no idea why -- it's angst. Or... uh... something.

Oh well. 'Twas good.

Oh, that was horible! Not you story, but what that man, James, went through... What that poor winged girl went through! It was horrible. You wrote it extremely well, it made me tear up... Wow... That was really amazing...

Ah! Thats evil! Just like Jeb. Kinda freaky, but still really good. Poor experiments... *shivers*. Creepy.

Whoa. That's quite something.

It's just plain freaky.

Well-written, but utterly disturbing.

*shudders*

That was horrible. So sad but very well written lots of emotion passed on but that was awefully sad.
*silent tears pouring down my face*
Good Luck *sniffle*
Samantha

I have a feeling that that's how things were run at the School. You're in for life. Like the Death Eaters.
O.G.

Wow, and Jeb says the experiments aren't human. Excelent story though, well done.

OH! Another great one! Very well-done. Very sad, but, hey, those are usually the best. The ones that make you want to cry. I liked the double-experiment idea, too. Poor James. He thought that the only experiments were the hybrids.