THAT WAS AWESOME!

OMG! That has to be a favorite of mine! I love your technique! Your style in writing is great! I admire it! Your very talented. I lvoed the story! Er...Song fic!

I woulod give you one tip: Credit the band/singer whot the song belongs to.

-Elie

Wow. I almost felt... sorry... for Terra...

*splashes cold water on face*

Woah... that was scary.

Good job, again. Wow...

-...SA...-

(speechless) that was... awesome! No one can describe more of Terra! A really great job!

cool. hm...i don't like terra but i like how you didn't totally change her character by making her a jerk/slut/totally evil super villian or something like everyone does to her. i mean you actually make her seem decent, or at least like she had more than just the traitor side to her. which is cool.

People and their disillusions. REally sad actually.