*gigglefart* That was really sweet. It made me smile loads of times. :)

yay I really like this story, It makes you nod in that knowing way, like, "uh-huh, I know all these people", but sometimes it makes you guess about who the people are. I also, if I'm correct in guessing, like how there's a dash of EdWin in there (That "beautiful girl with a high blonde pony-tail, holding Edward’s arm" was Winry, right?) :-))

aww... what a sweet story! ^^

That's so awesome and cute!

Really sweet. The naming him after Maes really made me like it, because I think he and Roy seemed like close friends. Infact, it's not just sweet. It's brilliantly adorable.

Oh my goodness!
That was so adorable.
Every time you described a photo I was able to envision it in my head so kudos on your amazing writing skill (Even if English is not your first language ;P ).
I thought that they were all in character, a little OOC sometimes but that is alright since everyone does that once and a while.
Very nice piece.
Thank you for the enjoyable read.

HOLY **! THAT WAS MY FAVOURITE ROYAI EVER!! AH! i love that so so so so so so much! *squeak*

thank you thank you thank you!

*faints*

~when Logic meets Art~
-Kai Isolated-

WOW I LOVE IT
Over and Out
mm.

I found that sweet. I got the impression that you chose not to use names for the majority of the piece so as not to give away what was really going on in the story. That said, because there were so many characters involved, using 'he' and 'she' and things of that nature got confusing, because there was more than one 'he'--you know what I mean? And though I know you wanted to give a vivid picture of the photographs, it almost seemed like a bit much--that in mind, I know that the descriptions likely were meant to help reveal the identity of each character as you went along, so I know why you did the longer descriptions.

Otherwise, this was well written! I didn't notice any blatant spelling or grammatical errors.

I hope you don't think I'm being too harsh, because I really did think this was well done! Please keep writing!

Riza, sua história está incrível !
Muitoboa, as fotografias muito bem descritas e até parece com aquele ova de FMA !
Muito bem escrita, parabéns, ótima pra quem é fã da Riza e do Roy !
**: Your affair Hugo !
Kisses !

Very Nice.
Very Kawaii!

Eyes like onyx are just perfect!
I just loved it. I would appreciate if their story continued in the anime... =/

kissus, du

olá \o/
achei o link da tua fic numa comunidade de Royai no orkut *-*~
e resolvi ler :D realmente adorei *-*~
eu geralmente não comento em fanfics em inglês (comento só às vezes...), pois é muito mais fácil entender inglês do que escrever em tal língua ¬¬ xD
mas, como você fala português, resolvi comentar :D
tua fic está tão fofinha *o*~
=3
tchau, küss küss X3

this is really cute. I understand your grammar problems and stuff like that (I'm learning spanish right now, and not having a good time with it) You could make a sequel by telling the story roy tells to his son. This was a great idea, I like it!

Very cute! I love it, it's adorable! You really have a great mind for this, you know that, don't you? It's very original, and very sweet! I understand that you're having some grammar/ spelling issues because English isn't your first language, yeah? If you'd like, I'd be more than happy to Beta for you - check over everything and edit it before you post it... If you're interested, let me know! I love the story! Keep up the good work! ^^

Oh that was so cute. I really liked it, good idea! nee-san=big sister, nii-san=big brother. So you might want to fix that.